All mistakes made

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Flowerangel, Jul 21, 2011.

  1. I got bored..

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    The character: Jεff

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    The character: καᎥlyn
     
  2. Bummmmmmmmmmp
     
  3. "Hey!" Sophie shouted as i pulled into her driveway. "What's up?"

    "You having a party tonight? I'm up for one." I said getting out of my car and onto her porch.

    "Definitely! Something wrong?"

    "Ehh.. I don't want to talk about it.. Where is your alcohol stash?" I said stuffing my hands into the back pockets of my jeans.

    "Right this way." She said smirking and leading me around her house.

    After an hour of drinking 3 beers and a few shots, a group of college people arrived at Sophie's. I had put on one of Sophie's short mini dresses that was hot pink with purple lace.

    "Hi, I'm Colin." said a guy behind me in a low sexy voice as I sat on Sophie's couch.
    I turned around and gave him a smile.

    "And I'm Kailyn."

    "Kailyn, very cute. Your name don't match your looks."

    I just smirked at him and looked around seeing various groups of people dancing along to the music in their own ways.
    Suddenly, Colin pulled me toward him, and just like that we made out.
    I didn't know what I was doing. I closed my eyes and then He just started taking off my dress. I heard someone asking people,"Where's Kailyn?"
    Next thing I knew, Jeff, was pushing Colin off me and picking me up off the couch.
    "You don't want to do this Kailyn, seriously, you're better than that." He said pulling my dress back on me and carrying me out to my car.

    "I can walk myself! Put me down! I wanna party!"

    "No Kailyn, you're just going to end up being upset about this."

    "How did you know where I was?!"

    "Sophie called Hill to ask if she'd seen you and he asked me to come and get you."

    "Ugh.. Just let me be."

    "Alright. But you aren't staying here."

    Last thing I could remember was sitting in the passenger seat of my car with my head against Jeff as I stared up at him as he drove me to an unknown place.
     
  4. Bumppppppppppp
     
  5. When I woke up, I was in a tent, in a sleeping bag, in One of Jeff's long T-shirts, and alone.
    My reaction was to just lay there and cry.
    Immediately, Jeff came into the tent and pulled me against his chest as I cried.
    After what seemed an hour, I finally was able to talk.

    "Where are we? Why'd you take me here?"

    "We are out in the woods just a mile from my house. I took you here because I know your parents wouldn't wanna see you like this, you didn't belong at that party last night. Your parents think you spent the night at Delilah's."

    "Thank you, for being here for me. I need to start thinking before I do things." I just laid in his arms as he pat my back.
    "Is Hill okay?" I said looking up at him.
    He shrugged,"After you drove off yesterday, he apologized to me and drove off. He called me a couple hours later asking if I had seen you. We contacted people and well Sophie told us where you were so he had me get you since you were mad at him."

    I felt so bad for hurting Hill... Again. Nobody gets third chances, only the lucky ones. I had no idea what to do with myself anymore.
    Jeff wasn't right for me, he could never commit to one girl. I don't want that.
     
  6. Bump!!!! This was the first fan fic I read....just saying
     
  7. Awww  that is cute. Lol