All mistakes made

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Flowerangel, Jul 21, 2011.

  1. nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo plz no!!!!
     
  2.  NOOO!
    Please continue!!!
     
  3. Sadie! Don't 

    I did the implosion 
     
  4. I take it back. I didn't know it was interesting 
     
  5. I made her ,
     
  6. This us a great story :D
     
  7. BUMPDATE!
    look u got a bump date THIS STORY IS GREAT!
     
  8. im rereading it lol
     
  9. MOARZ OR I KEEL YU
     
  10. Sorry. This weekend I've been doing stuff for my birthday. 
    I'll do my best to update tomorrow
     
  11. Oh well Happy Birdday!
    See I put Bird lol
     
  12. Happy Birthday
     
  13. Happy Birthday!! 
     
  14. thanks guys
     
  15. Hill and I went up to his room. He doesn't show people from school his room often since nobody knows that he is a specialist with electronics besides his family and me. He has multiple inventions in the future such as the very first touch screen phone. I hope I don't ruin this for him with my "re-try".
     
  16. Sorry for such a little update. I have no time. I've been having to clean for last minute family coming up for a funeral
     
  17. MOARZ NOW OR I TURN INTO CANNIBAL!
     
  18. I get so caught up thinking about messing things up that I didn't realize that Hill is trying to take off my clothes and saying, "Babe, are you alright?"

    "Oh ya, sorry." I said smiling and kissing his cheek, "I'm sorry, but I don't want to be doing this tonight, I'm now scared of getting pregnant. It happened to Delilah, could happen to me."

    He nodded and he got up acting mad at me.

    "Well, it's getting late, I'll see you tomorrow Kailyn." He said kissing my lips quickly. I kissed back and fast walked to my car.
    What's up with guys and always wanting sex? It makes me so frustrated.
    As I was driving, a random man ran in front of my car, crossing the middle of the road. Quickly, I slammed on my brakes and rolled down my window as he stopped in front of my car.
    "Oh my gosh, you could of killed yourself, you better watch out next time."
    "Haha nah, I need a ride home, my girlfriend dumped me and made me get out of her car." He said sounding drunk as he opened the passenger side, "Oh and the name is Jeff."

    "And I'm Kailyn, where to Jeff?"

    "953 Jalken Blvd." He said yawning. Soon a I knew it, this drunk was passed out in my car. I had no idea who he was. He looked close to my age and was pretty cute, Dark hair, the most gorgeous brown eyes, and super tanned skin. I tried waking him up but that didn't work out. Stupid drunk. I arrived at his house and there were no lights on in the house. I had no idea what to do. So I reached into his pocket and got out a ring of 7 keys. My weak self had to drag him to his porch. I tried different keys and got it on the 5th try. I was so scared. What if this guy was a bad guy or his family was? I didn't want to leave him out on the porch though and let him freeze and get sick. So I let him lay on the floor and I grabbed a sticky note and a pen from a purse and wrote:
    YOU PASSED OUT IN MY CAR. BE MORE SAFE.
    -Kailyn.

    When I returned home, I knew I'd be in trouble for going out while I was grounded.