Chapter Seven, Cracked out and exploded. I gawked. My jaw dropped. I totally forgot about telling him about Kade and I. "Jeffery...I-I can't." I trembled, holding his hands steady. His eyes were wet with tears. "W-What?" "I-I can't Jeffery..." "And why not?!" he barked, embracing me closely. I felt my face burn with blush. "B-Because of Emma, Jeffery, she's out to kill me-"I lied, but he cut me off. He actually started cursing. "Fuck Emma, Karo! I don't care! I'll have to rip her apart so you're mine forever, okay?!" he cried, shaking my shoulders, scaring me. I started crying, holding onto him as he pulled me closer. "Jeffy..." "Flaks..." It was silent for a good five minutes, and I wiped his tears, slipping through his eyes. "Hush. Now, I-I promise I will..." He had been on his knees. "W-When, Karo? In college? When we're never going to be in touch again?!" he asked rising up. I grabbed both of his arms. "Jeffery, calm down." "No Karoline! I won't calm down!" "Please Jeffery, just-" "No!" He had me against Mrs.Seiwert's wall. I was beyond frozen. I was a lobster red, running my numb tongue over my braces, trying to speak. I stammered, trying to use logics. "P-Please J-Jeffery, this isn't h-how y-you want to spend the second to last day with me-" "Actually, it isn't! I love you, Karoline! I'm climbing the walls trying to keep cool, but it's freaking mission impossible!" My jaw dropped. He kept going. "Y-Youre too much to resist! I can't stand hearing about you and Kade together anymore! You don't notice me slowly cracking, waiting to explode and just wanting to take you all for my own! I want you to myself, Flaky! It makes me tick when I see you talking to Nick, Carter, and Kade! I want to keep you as my angel! Not theirs!" Tears sprang through my eyes. It's now three-thirty. "J-Jeffery!" I cried, slipping from his hands grasp. I can only take so much stress and tension before I blow. I screamed, crawling on the ground, speeding through the door and outside into the Mannion courtyard. I dashed for the outside exit. I heard my name. I cracked. I exploded. I had it.
Oh, author's note from lil' old me~ Hey you guys! XD I am writing this story, drafting it, and i want to get it published for you guys. (or at least try) but I need to know on what I need to improve on before I can write my whole story. Leave suggestions.
Chapter Eight, The Saver and a Visit In the Hospital. My eyes were wet with tears, the ground was slick with with ice, snow, and more damn ice. Sigh. I ran, almost slipping on a corner, but I grabbed the fence. I started running again, and when I turned, it was already too late for me to grab the fence. I guess this is wear I die? Huh. In the middle of the parking lot? I lie against the cold asphalt, breathing falling to a stop. I cracked my skull open. The blood from my head dominated the dirt in the snow. I heard a scream. It was a teacher. Not just any teacher...Mrs.Barges. Fishy lady, is what I prefer to call her. Why don't I tell a little story before I die, huh? It's spring in the month of April, and I'm outside of the school. I'm in sixth grade again. I'm eating my tiny little goldfish crackers, and I toss one at Annie to catch. She missed, and accidentally stepped on it. Mrs.Barges growled. "Can you pick that up?" she asked. Annie shook her hear. I was infuriated, biting my lips not to slap her and call her a wanker. Stupid lady. After she left, I poked Annie and said,"Fishy fishy lady." She broke into a fit of giggles, and that's how she got her nickname. Who knew that bitch was going to save me? I moaned,horribly tired, and freezing. I heard slow stomps and hollering. Fishy Lady kneeled down beside me, having a clean towel from the cafeteria in her hands, lifting me. I screamed as she touched me, it hurting like a BITCH. "Shhhh...We'll be at the hospital soon..." she cooed, the ambulance magically there. Well fuck, is she magic? An Hour later.. I'm in a hospital bed, the back of my head hurts, and I have a bandage around my eyes. Well, fuck. I moaned, and I heard a bit of whispering. I managed to say,"Who's visiting?" I had a cracked smile now. I heard Mrs.Barges,"Karoline, I'm sorry about what happened sweetie. Are you okay? How did you fall?" "I-I'm alright, Mrs.Barges..I-I was running on the ice carelessly..." I lied easily. Yeah, like I'm going to say I was running away from my lover because he was scaring me. "Why are there bandages around my eyes?..." I asked, just staring at the dark. "Well, your vision was messed up in the process. We had to fix a couple of things, and Well...you have a different colored eye." the male doctor said. "What color is it?...." I asked, placing a light finger on the bandage. "Grey," he said plainly. "You have a visitor too." I sighed, preparing for the worst. Jeffery and Kade? Hell, I don't know. I was in a glass box. "Kitty..." I heard. My ears perked up. RYAN! "R-Ryan?" I stammered, holding my arms out. I play baseball with Ryan, as a Young Gun. Our old science teacher runs the game. "Hey Kitty, you alright?" "Yeah, I'm a tough little soldier, Ryan. Where's Jeff?" "He's outside, crying." I sighed, playing with his fingers blindly. "Gah. Kade?" "Over raged and at soccer." "Jeez. In this weather?" "I guess." he said. Meep. That's just PEACHY. JUST FREAKING PEACHY. ------ Question: What should happen next? Who should the couple be? Leave them below!
Well, Jeffery caused Karoline to hurt herself. He's lost all insanity for the girl. Who should the couple be, in your opinion?