After June, Before December 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *RachelRebel (01), Mar 31, 2012.

  1. Bump!!!! It's taking SOOO long for you to update
     
  2. WILL YA FRICKIN WELL UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!![/color{
     
  3. WILL YA FRICKIN WELL UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. Bump! And UPDATE WOMAN!
     
  5. ): update darling !
     
  6. HEY, HEY, HEY. I got it  sorry it took awhile XD but here is my POV, thank you  dont get scared now 
    Rachel's POV:
    It was a dark and stormy night... Haha wow that's cheesy! No but seriously.....it was dark, and I'm sure there was a chance of a storm. I got out the car and while I was walking to the house I saw one of my friends.
    "Hey Rachel!"
    "hey Elisa!" I smiled.
    "I like your outfit!" Elisa studied me,
    "I like yours too!" I replied. She was a celebrity I'm guessing. She was wearing a light blue party dress, to match her sweet blue eyes and silky blonde hair. Although she had big sunshades, pink lipstick (not too much), and black stilettos. Pretty epic.
    As for me I walked up those porch steps and a lot of people gazed up at me. I sorta got that excited feeling,
    Sophie saw me and dropped her jaw.
    "I Love you costume!" she smiled
    "aww thanks Sophie, I love yours too!" I said, she was a cop, so cool.
    I walked in the door, black fluffy rave boots (boot things with like this huge fluffyness. It looks like just big black fluff beginning a few inches under my knee and ends to the floor of course, if you still don't know look it up), yellow leggings, black shorts, yellow studded belt, black shirt with batman logo on it, cape, and mini bat wings, a black long wig with yellow tips, fingerless black gloves, a black mask that stops before my nose, and purple contacts..
    I AM.........BATGIRL 
    So many people turned to look at me and i blushed but kept my cool. Sabrina came over to me smiling and said hi, I greeted her back.
    "Want a drink?" she asked.
    "sure." I said, I knew she didn't mean like that, cuz Sabrina isn't like that. She went to the ice box and asked me what drink I wanted.
    "Pshh, dr. Pepper" I said, just at that time someone pulled me against them. I turned and looked in astonishment.
    "U-um..." I stuttered, it was so NOT Jason.
    "My god you're hot.." Zack smiled, I bit my lip as he pulled me on him. His brown gelled up hair popping his brown eyes.
    "Uh Zack..." I looked at him, he was right in my face, his arms around my waist.
    "Mmh, you can be my hero, batgirl." he said flirty, I tried to get off him but he held me closer.
    "Zack..!"
    "Baby don't be like that, come here..." he laughed, I struggled to get him off when another hand was on me.
    "Woah bro, get off her." Daniel said, he pulled me away from Zack and Sabrina took me.
    "you alright?" Sabrina asked, I nodded nervously, well that was interesting.
    I picked up my Dr.pepper and opened it, taking a sip.
    "Eh, happens when you look that gorgeous." Sabrina smiled, I laughed slightly.
    "I didn't even dress like....a lot of these people..." I said looking around at all the..Sl..no wait that's mean...future prostitutes  that's better. Haha you get the point.
    "Girl like you need to dress that way to look attractive." Sabrina said
    "Aww you! Come here!" I said hugging her. (by the way while this was happening Daniel was still trying to calm Zack down....just sayin)
    "Rachel!!!" I head Avril call me, she walked up and we hugged.
    "Hey!" I smiled, I loved her costume!!!
    "OH MY GOSH I LOVE YOUR COSTUME!!!!" we practically said at the same time. After we had our girly excitement fest i went calm again.
    "So whats up?" I asked casually while taking a sip of Dr.Pepper.
    "Oh yeah! Jason and I were looking for you! But Jason split up..where'd he go?"
    I almost choked on my dr. Pepper
    "oh um he's looking for me? Wow, oh hey have you seen Stacey?"
    "Ugh yeah." avril said in disgust and explained everything that happened. Wow Stacey is just ugh, I swear man. But it's nice to know friends got your back. Avril's amazing.
    "haha I love you!" I smiled at her
    "Hey, it's what I do." she smiled back. I drank more of my drink.
    "hey I'll see if I can find Jason okay? Brb!" she said and walked off, as I drank a nice gulp of more dr. Pepper I felt someone tap my shoulder.
    "Oh um hi alexis" I said when I faced her, oh jeez another one of those...costumes.
    "Hey, can I ask you to do me a....favor?"
    "oh uh sure?" I said curiously
    "Okay well I wanted to play a horror movie for my group but the movies are in that room over there" she pointed near the staircase, "everyones either too scared or too busy to do anything and I thought you could go get it." she said. Umm room? I'm sorta scared..ehh I'm sure it'll be fine jeez I'm such a scardy cat I need to be a woman. After all I am batgirl, I have nothing to fear.
    "umm well where'd you say it was?" I asked nervously.
    "Okay go up the stairs, when you do you'll notice that they're two ways, go to your right and go down that stairway then take a left to that room. Open the door and you're there. The movies should be on a shelf but be careful, that room isn't used much so it's sorta like a garage, don't trip over anything." she explained, I blinked and took it all in.
    "oh um okay..." I said, I looked around and checked the time, 7:40. I'll be right back and then I can see Jason. Okay.
    I took one last sip of my dr. Pepper and went off to go look for the movie in that....room. I walked to the front of the house and went up the stairs, the stairs split into two ways, I took a right and walked down the walkway, then I went down the stairs which stopped at a door to a room. Thunder Grumbled a bit, I really wish I had that dr. Pepper still...just sayin. I took a deep breath and braced myself..well...here I go.

     dun dun dun! What will happen next? Death? Love? Insanity? All? Find out on the next episode of- yeahh I can't do this lol I'll work on the next part soon loves  stay tuned 
     
  7. They'll lock her in there
     
  8. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE. I have an obsession with this story 
     
  9. OHMEHGAWD!THIS STORY IS FREAKIN AWESOME!IM A TOTAL FAN OF THIS AWESOME STORY

    -Darkness
     
  10. UPDATE NOW OR I WILL KILL THE KOALA 
     
  11. *Bang*
     
  12. Yup she gets locked in there
     
  13. Hey guys sorry Ive been really sick lately I'm sorry, I've just kinda been in my bed Layin around but I'll continue my story ^_^
     
  14. I looked around almost everywhere for Rachel, I couldn't find her anywhere. I split up with avril and whatnot, too many people asked us questions about If we were dating. I should probably clear that up but I didn't answer much of it. I'm sure they'll eventually figure it out later.
    Anyways I was looking around more when avril tapped me on the shoulder, she said she found Rachel. I must admit I was extremely excited and nervous and shy all of a sudden. Although I don't know if it's good or bad when I say it all left when we came back to where Rachel was supposedly standing and she wasn't there. What's going on?
    I turned around and saw Alexis hi-five Stacey and they laughed. What was that about? I turned to this guy.
    "hey have you seen Rachel?" I asked.
    "Davis? Uh yeah but last time I saw her she was right here talking to Alexis." he responded curiously. I nodded and then went over to Alexis after stacey left.
    "Hey." I said getting her attention, ugh her outfit was disturbing. I had to look off at something.
    "Jason..!" she smiled, "Whats up?"
    "uh you were talking to Rachel right? Well I need to know where she went after that." I said with a hint of determination. She stopped for a second and looked away nervously.
    "oh umm I uhh...well..." she said, she started to stutter...wait a second.
    "...What'd you do?" I asked, I could just feel something wrong.
    "N-nothing..I was just uhh..I asked her to go on a little mission for me..."
    "Alexis...what. Did. You. Do?" I asked feeling a pulse rise up.
    "uhh...I-"
    "Tell me where she is."
    "um near the staircases! I'm sorry!" she blurted, I clenched my fist.
    "Ugh." I said, then I left to go to the staircases, my head pounding. If she's hurt I'm gonna bash someone in the face.
    The lights flickered a bit after a surge of thunder, causing a handful of people to flip out. This isn't good, I gotta find Rachel.
    I went to the front of the house near the staircases, I looked around a bit. Then I went up staircases...they split. This house was like a maze, no joke. I first went to the left and heard noises, I opened a door for the first room since it was the only one with a light on.
    "Woah!" I exclaimed with my eyes wide..I think you know what happened. All I gotta say was guy on girl, they weren't like doing anything major but they were making out and his shirt was off and he unzipped her costume halfway and ugghh...aauugghh...eww. Disturbing.
    I quickly got out of their....where Is she?! I walked to the right side of the staircase (haha get it?...Right? Like ri-oh nevermind ) and then I glanced at the rooms and then I saw the staircase lead to a closed room. But the light was out, and who would go into that room anyways? Ugh this Is horrible, there is no way I'm going to ever-
    My thoughts were interrupted by the scream of a girl. Right from the door in front of me. ....it can't be her! It can't be...
     
  15. That was jason's POV