Adopting A Lover

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by alyscn, Jul 20, 2014.

  1. We cleaned the stage as the crowd start to go lesser.

    "That was a blast," I exclaimed.

    "Sure it-" He replied.

    Just then Suzanne hold his hand and starts to hold it like they were in a relationship.

    "Suzanne! Stop," He said.

    "Sorry, tought it might cheer you up," She said.

    He angrily walks away and disappear in a few seconds.

    "Ok...," I said.

    Suzanne raises her eyebrow and looks at me like I did something wrong. She walks towards me then shouts.

    "Ah! Aiden this bitch pinched me!" She lied.

    "I did not do anything," I said.

    "Stop lying bastard!" She replied.

    Aiden helps her to go up.

    "She is unfit for you! Just choose me," She said.

    "Choose you? I never chose anyone or anything!" He said.

    "I mean.... uh, Be close with me," She says while being embarrassed.

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    Next Week
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    Suzanne has their 'secret' meeting with her clan of girls.

    "I have a plan to take Aiden from her," She says.

    "What is it?" A girl asks.

    "I ask for forgiveness and be friends with her," She explains.

    "Friends?!?!?" Another girl asks.

    "Like what others say 'Keep your feiends close and your enemies closer,'"
     
  2. Chapter III-A New Friend

    I walked down a hallway bumping to someone. AGAIN.

    "Ow...," She screamed.

    "Sorry, Aly.....," I said.

    "Eglantine...,Well this is awkward," She replied.

    "So where you studied before?" I asked.

    "I'll keep that as a secret,"She replied.

    "Ok...,"I replied. "I will go already."

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    Sorry for short update. Try to catch up sometime.
     
  3. I continue to head to my locker. I carelessly open it seeing a peice of paper falling down.

    "Weird..,"I whispered."I better call Amy,"I whispered again.

    "Amy, something weird was in my locker," I said.

    "Ooh, Do tell,"She replied.

    "It says... Beware.. Yada Yada Boop Boop.....Meet me at auditorium at 8,"I said.

    "Meet her at 8!" She screamed. "Gawd, Prof. is coming towards me..Bye!

    "Sir will be angry at me for the 300000000th time,"I said.
     
  4. Chapter III-Continuation

    I start to run when someone grabs me and pulls me in a dark small room.

    "Oof!"I exclaimed.

    "Hey! Aly,"Jake said.

    "You frightened me, Why am I actually?"I asked.

    "Just wanting to say, I like you, Do you like me too?"He asked.

    I started to blushed and said "Of course, but we are both still to young and your handsome I'm like ugly,"

    "I feel like I have goosebumps when I'm with you, I like the way you get scolded but have the chance to smile at me," He said. "I love everything about you,"He said.

    I started to nod.

    "Let's put this as a secret relationship."I explained.

    "Sure," He replied.

    I pushed the door to put myslef out. I did not want to say it to anyone because it was a 'secret relationship'.
     
  5. Wall me when you update
     
  6. Aren't those names from the story 'Brother my Brother' from Episode?
     
  7. Wall me when updated
     
  8. Yeah, those are the names from Brother my Brother...
     
  9. Update. Bump
     
  10. Could use some improvement. But I like it. Wall me when updated ^-^
     
  11. Yep, At first I wanted to copy. But it was not original so I copied the name but changed the plot and stuff.
     
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    Next Week
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    There was this news that spread around the whole school.

    "Suzanne, was bumped by a car!" A girl said.

    "Is she dead?" 1 girl asked.

    "Yes...!" another said.

    Shit, She is dead just then someone texted me.

    "My little princess, Anyone bothering you?"Someone said.

    It was not Jake, But I tried to text him making he did not change his number.

    "Hey, Jakey Baby!" I texted.

    "Hey Aly, Any problemo?" He asked.

    "None, Wanted to make sure your fine," I replied.

    This is number is weird it was not Eglantine, Jake, Aiden, Mom. Who must it be?

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    Who was it :0
     
  13. Update. BUMP