a school affair (a fan fiction by the)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by kittehwars, Aug 11, 2011.

  1. Harry and charlie walked into school on monday. Automatically they were surrounded by their peers.
    "omg! Are you ok Charlie?!"
    "did you seriously scare bill off?!"
    Are a few of the comments they were given. Then bill suddenly appeared and pushed everyone out of the way and picked Harry up.
    "listen, peewee! I want you and your girlfriend to meet me and Reggie in the park today at 5:00 for a fight. If you don't show up, we'll find you!"
    Bill dropped him. The crowd suddenly dispersed to spread the word.
    "we're screwed.." Harry said
    "we went through tons of crap from them, now it's time to teach them a lesson in hurt!" Charlie said in an intense voice
    "they can pick us up! I'm sure they can punch us across a room too!"
    They talked while they walked to their first block.
    "dude, there is a f***ing kick a** demon in you! Let him free!"
    Harry didn't trust charlie's judgement, considering her judgement has gotten his arm Broken seven times. As they sat in math, Harry looked over and saw Bill drawing. He held up the drawing and it was a crudely draw picture of Harry being ripped in half.
    Bill and Reggie giggled like little girls and fist bumped. Harry turned around "I'm going to kick their butts so hard..."
     
  2. Please leave a comment
     
  3. I like it so far. Keep going. 
     
  4. Good Story!! More please 
     
  5. Awesome wrote more
     
  6. Harry and Charlie Arrived at the park at 5:00, as instructed. They saw a mass of their peers formed in a circle. They walked over to find bill and Reggie.
    "so you showed up" Bill smirked
    "why would we miss out on a chance to show you who's boss!" Charlie replied.
    Bill ran over and punched charlie while Reggie tackled Harry.
    Charlie got up, with nose bleeding, she said "I guess only a**holes can hit girls!" she yelled as she charged.
    Meanwhile, Reggie had Harry pinned and was about to punch when Harry grabbed and twisted his fist. Reggie let go, giving Harry the chance to kick Reggie off, and he did. Harry stood up and kicked Reggie's side and farted in his face as he moaned in pain.
    Meanwhile, Charlie had jumped on the back of bill and was bashing him in the face with her fists. He eventually grabbed one of her arms and threw her off. She landed on her back in the grass and just laid there, in pain. Bill ran over to Harry and punched his guts. Harry, didn't fall, he just was knocked back a bit and came back with a face full if rage. He grabbed bill by the collar of his shirt and threw him on the ground. Bill got up and threw a punch, but Harry ducked and kicked Bill's left shin. bill fell on one knee and grabbed Harry's leg and pulled him down. Bill raised his fist, but suddenly Charlie run up, grabbed Bill's arm and pulled it behind his back. Harry stood up and punched bill in the face and kicked his crotch. Bill fell back and moaned in pain. The crowd cheered,
    "why to go!"
    "yeah!"
    "you showed that d***!"
    "encore! Do it again!"
    Harry and Charlie simply walked off, got on their bikes, and left.
     
  7. Leave a comment or the last two parts won't exist!
     
  8. Awesomeness!!!!!! Go girls!!! bullies suck!!
     
  9. Bump, update tonight.
     
  10. It was now saturday, and Harry and Charlie where hanging out in Harry's room. Charlie laid on the bed as Harry was on the computer.
    "hey, go on derptube and see if anything cool is up" charlie said
    "ok... what the F***!" Harry exclaimed.
    "what?"
    "our fight yesterday is on the most viewed page!"
    "oh my god! That's awesome! Check the comments!"
    Harry started to read over some comments.
    "let's see... 'score one for the underdogs.', 'ahahaha! Dem meat heads got served!', 'the dorks got lucky!'"
    "hahahahaaaa, that's freaking awesome!"
    "hey, I got a message on herpbook."
    "who is it?"
    "holy-! It's fricken bill!"
    Charlie sat up.
    "what does it say?!"
    " 'don't expect to live much longer.', what the hell does that mean?"
    "ask him, not me"
    Harry sent his reply.
    "' Reggie's older brother is in a gang, and now there's a bounty on your heads!' "

    Leave a comment, or the epic ending won't happen!
     
  11. Honestly, I don't like the direction I'm taking this story... Might as well end it...
     
  12. Sorry, I just don't like the direction, it would be extremely hard to work with, but I'll post an alternate ending