A Fallen Angel. A Deceived Snob.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by MickyMcLovin, Jul 1, 2011.

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  1. Either way it great.. But I wanna see the closure 
     
    #141 lord_kuching, Jul 8, 2011
  2. Continue! I u dnt I'll stop ALL my stories.
     
    #142 *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 8, 2011
  3. - Wow Thiss , Iss Jusst A Storry Butt It Almost Made Meh Cry !  Yhuee Should Make It Where He alived In The Ennd Pleasse People Love A Happy Endinq !
     
    #143 *ashontee (01), Jul 8, 2011
  4. Ok I luv ed da story it was awesome (even though I wasn't in it ...)
    But he's dead now the bad guys av won I think u should leave it as a drop ending!!!
     
    #144 *EMMA_- (01), Jul 8, 2011
  5. Make ur story different from all the rest and let the bad guys take the ending
     
    #145 *EMMA_- (01), Jul 8, 2011
  6. THEY AREN'T BAD GUYS. And continue it!!!
     
    #146 *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 8, 2011
  7. Yer they r!!!
     
    #147 *EMMA_- (01), Jul 8, 2011
  8. Nuh uh!
     
    #148 *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 8, 2011
  9. Hahahahhahahahahhah I justed asked Micky on pm n she said tht they were bad guys the jhon n the 1 who stabbed the boy in da neck

    BOOM beat tht 
     
    #149 *EMMA_- (01), Jul 8, 2011
  10. 
     
    #150 *-Elena- (01), Jul 8, 2011
  11. Yer ur shocked 
     
    #151 *EMMA_- (01), Jul 8, 2011
  12. Lol I it wen I'm rite 
     
    #152 *EMMA_- (01), Jul 8, 2011
  13. Ladies ladies !! Please stop fighting lol one last update. And em, I love the stories where evil prevails. And in a way, it does. Y'all will just have to fin out:)
     
    #153 MickyMcLovin, Jul 8, 2011
  14. Lol k micky
     
    #154 *EMMA_- (01), Jul 8, 2011
  15. Now just tell um tht I'm rite xxx
     
    #155 *EMMA_- (01), Jul 8, 2011
  16. Omg, she killed him Oh No
     
    #156 Nikolette, Jul 8, 2011
  17. I know it's not important but u have a typo 15th like "yoi"
    It's really good when describing the new chick is that from chloe's point of view?? If it is put roughly 5'6 or something like that because the character couldn't know the Height of the new chick.

    Ninja
     
    #157 -Ninja-2, Jul 8, 2011
  18. 15th line from bottom***
     
    #158 -Ninja-2, Jul 8, 2011
  19. I had to re-read that post 7 time before I partially understood it. 
     
    #159 Jess5509, Jul 8, 2011
  20. Lmao I still dnt understand
     
    #160 *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 8, 2011
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