A Fallen Angel. A Deceived Snob.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by MickyMcLovin, Jul 1, 2011.

  1. I apologize, I gave Mickayla my name. I had meant to change it but I forgot lol SORRY
     
  2. Hhmmm... Can say a word without seeing the next update 
     
  3.  it suppose to be cant say a word b4 seeing the next update
     
  4. Hahah!!! Bad spell check!! Yeah haha I wanted a cliff hanger. I'm working on the next one now.
     
  5. Is it wrong to bump myself? IDGAF BUMP

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  6. Nice update Mickayla
     
  7. im suffering writers block! Idk what to write next....any ideas? Lmao
     
  8. You could write about hmm .. I gotta think some more It's that Easy when I write a story but harder when someone else has mental block
     
  9. Ikr? Mikayla is scared of jhon...but I don't know why
     
  10. Micky.I have an idea. I'll club you about it.
     
  11. Micky amazing
     
  12. JESS I LOVE YOU!!!! EVERYONE THANK JESS!!! she helped me' out!!! She's my Co-Writer!!! lmao !!!!Heart you Jess!!

    MARRY ME ELENA!!
     
  13. Yay Im a co writer!!

    Bow down to me! 

    Lol
    ]£$$
     
  14. YES ILL BE UR WIFE MICKY baby jess i didnt forget u tho
     
  15. Lol ok so I need another 2 guysanyone interested?
     
  16. Fine! I'm taken anywys!! :D
     
  17. "hey ladies! Fancy meeting you here!" said Jhon Dumas, his smooth voice maneuvering to wow Chloe and Mickayla. Both girls sat wide eyed, in complete and utter shock, Mickayla in fear, she was trembling and fir once, her otherworldly perfectness was shaded by Jhons looks. Truly Perfect.
    "umm....hello..? What did I hypnotize you?" he said with a chuckle. Chloe regained her composure and spoke first. "what do you want Dumas? Can't you see we are trying to enjoy the show?" Jhon was taken aback for a second. "well I just wanted to have a word with blondie over here." he stated matter-of-factly while jabbing a thumb in Mickayla's direction.
    Chole stood there, Open-mouthed while Mickayla got up and walked with Jhon to a secluded corner. You could tell that they were whispering fiercely and Chloe had just about had enough when jhon grabbed mickayla's shoulders hard and shook her.
    "no way in hell is that boy getting away with that!" Chloe mumbled to herself.
    She slowly snuck up to them and listened into the conversation, hiding behind a ficus.
    "Mickayla What In Gods Name where you thinking??? You Can't Do That!!!!" jhon was pissed and he kept on shaking her.
    "Jhon I'm sorry But I have to!! Now leave me' alone!!" her voice was trembling and he sounded as if she were about to cry while she tried to push him off.
    "Yo Dumas! Get your paws off the poor girl!!" shouted Chloe, coming out from her hiding space.
    "Stay out of this Hope! It has nothing to do with you!" at this he turned his attention back to Mickayla "The Fallen Are BAD, Manakel! Why can't you see that?! You don't need the boy! You were already powerful!"
    "DO NOT call me' manakel! She is gone now!" these words confused Chloe and she was speechless...what boy? Manakel? How do these two know eachother?
    While Chloe was thinking, Brandon had noticed the scene taking place and decided to take charge. He pushed Jhon to the ground and turned towards Mickayla.
    "is this guy bothering you?" Jhon looked up in disgust, lifted himself up and stalked out of the club, yelling over his shoulder.
    "Manakel beware, for you won't last long!!" at those words, the perfect girl lost her perfect composure and broke Down In tears. Tears that glowed ruby red. That shined in the clubs lights and caught chloes attention. Tears of blood.


    GASP!!! what was jhon talking about? Who is manakel? What are the fallen? You don't know?! WELL I DO!!! haha keep reading!!
     
  18. yay reply came back and holy padoodles that was just un-jubilent
     
  19. You mean you didn't take complete pleasure in that scene?!? SHOCK *sarcasm* hehe I love it!!