a different love story 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ale16x (01), Aug 14, 2011.

  1. I woke up with a startled. That was a weird dream, i thought to myself. As soon as i woke up Patch walked in.

    " Good, you're awake. Again. Come with me," he said harshly.
    At first i hesitated i didnt know if i should follow him but then if i wanted any answers i had to.
    I followed him out of the room and into a dark hallway full of pictures on the wall. Pictures of Daniel and Patch always together . Some of these pictures looked really old and some looked new. But they couldn't have been taken too long ago since both guys looked the same as they did now. I quickly shook my head and deciced that there was more important things to worry about than some pictures.
    Patch led me into another room. This room was Bright and friendly. I walked in and i felt calm because it was a very peaceful room.

    " Stay here princess, i'll be back with your prince," patch said and left, locking the door behind him.

    I sat down in an old chair and waited. I heard Patch talking loudly to someone outside in the hallway. Five minutes pass by, then ten. Then Patch opened the door and shoved Daniel inside and locked the door and left.
    Daniel stood in the middle of the room starring down at his feet.

    " Daniel what is going on?" i asked, scared.

    " Please. Dont ask anymore," he said with a sad look on his face. " I dont want to hurt you anymore, Ale"

    " Then dont. Just tell me Daniel please, i have to know. I have the right to know!" i demanded

    " I dont know how to make you happy!" he yelled

    " Just tell me why you left me for over four months without a word!" i cried.

    Daniel's eyes became watery and he walked across the room to where i was and hugged me tighly. " I promise i will never leave you again," he kissed me lightly on the lips.

    " Daniel please tell me. You cant hurt me anymore," i begged.

    " You are not going to give up are you?" he asked, eyeing me suspiciously.

    I took a deep breath and looked at him in the eyes. He who i truly loved. The one that had me suffering and that i wanted by my side all my life. Daniel.
    " I need to know the truth. And if you cant give me that then i have nothing to do here," i said with a final tone in my voice.

    Daniel swallowed and sat down in the chair i have been sitting before. His eyes changed from brown to violet and he stared into my soul. " this isnt easy to explain, Ale. And i dont think you are ready to hear any of this, Patch insists you are and you think you are. So i will tell you even if you're not ready or even if it kills you," he croaked.

    I took another deep breath and sat down on the floor next to him. I took his hand and gave it a kiss and nodded for him to go on.

    " I had to knock you out because if i bring someone with me here to my sanctuary, well it hurts them. They can walk in here but their head will start hurting so bad and they'll pass out. Some can have a seizure, a heart attack or even die. I didnt know which one would be you and i didnt want to take any risks, so i did what i did," he took a deep breath and looked at me to see if i was shocked. I wasnt. I just nodded for him to go on because i knew inside me i was ready to hear whatever Daniel had to tell me. And none of it would really be a shock.
    " Ale, i'm not really what you think i am. I know it sounds weird Ale. Those people they want to kill me and if they ever put hands on you they will kill you , too," he explained.

    " But why do they want to kill you?" i asked.

    " Because i fell in love with you,"

    " And why do they care! We are just two regular humans in love!" i protested. At that Daniel took another deep breath and shook his head. His eyes were bright violet now and the glow around him was bright.
    I gasped and brought my hands to my mouth. I shook my heAd, too. It couldnt be possible. But yet... It was.
    My realization was too shocking and tears ran down my cheecks.

    " Daniel... You're not human," it was statement.

    He shoocked his head, " no" he said.

    " You... You are an.... An angel" i said

    Tears ran down Daniel's fAce and he looked away. " I'm sorry," was all he said.

    " But how did that happen ? Angels arent real Daniel," i said

    " Yes we are real. Very real, in fact. Some humans dont believe in them and that's when we consider them Outcasts. Ale you are an Outcast," he explained.

    " And is that bad?" i asked scared

    " Well not exactly. Angels arent supposed to fall in love with mortals which is exactly why me and Patch were cast down to Earth. But you are not just a mortal you are an Outcast with no religious background. And that makes you bad, real bad to them,"

    " Them? Who is them?" i asked

    " well we call them the Chairmen. They are the ones who make sure the ' Fallen ones' are on track here on Earth," he said patiently.

    " and... You're not. That's why they are following you," i said. If Daniel was risking his life for me i had to make sure i understood what was in stake.

    Daniel nodded. " i fell in love with you that's why they casted me down here. But now they are following me because i was still with you even After they told me i couldnt. They threaten your life , they said that if i ever came close to you again they'd kill you," he said with sad eyes.

    " And so you... Left me," i finished up for him.

    He looked me over and nodded in agreement.
    " But i came back which is why those two hooded figures were in your apartment just now," Daniel swallowed and then got up from the chair and offered me his hand to help me up, too.
    " Those two people were sent by Carragen, the head of the Chairmen. She wants us dead," he said.

    Well, hell. Somebody wants me dead. My head began hurting and my heart was pounding hard.
    " So what are we gonna do?" i asked.

    " we fight back" Daniel replied. At that point Patch walked in casually and stood in the threshold until Daniel told him to speak up.

    " I found out who were the two persons that were sent earlier," he said with dark eyes.

    " Go on," Daniel nodded and grabbed my hand and squeezed.

    " Well one was Amanda Addams and the other one... " patch made a long pause. " well it was Rebbeca Hathaway," he finally said.

    " Who's Rebbeca?" i asked when i felt Daniel's hand twitch a little.

    Daniel stood with his face in his hands. Patch answered," Rebbeca is your lover's ex romance for almost two centuries," he said flatly.

    I gasped loudly and took my hand out of Daniel's.
    " you are telling me that your physcho ex girlfriend wants to kill me!" i yelled at Daniel.

    " calm down is not like that. Me and her were mates in heaven . Everyone had a mate and well when i was cast down she stopped being my mAte," he explAined.

    " And why is she after me?" i asked , still mad.

    " She is after us. And she was sent. Nothing personal. I hope," he said.

    " you hope," i reapeated.

    " Okay lovers, now is time to move because they'll be coming any time now," Patch spoke up.

    Daniel grabbed my hand again and nodded at Patch who disappear into thin air.
    He squeezed my hand and next thing i felt was as if gravity didnt exist. I closed my eyes And when i opened them i was somewhere else. I looked around and saw that i had been transported to a different city. A different country...
     









  2. i love this....











    like a lot....









    like I'm gonna be back a lot more than I have been looking for updates....





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  3. Omg, did you get the name Patch from the book "hush hush", and Patch is also an angel in that too lol
     
  4. Yes i did ! I used his name.! I thought it'd be good ! And thank u !
     
  5. It makes me think of the book, like this is another story in the series about a different angel, tht is also his friend
     
  6. " Daniel, where are we?" i asked in a dazed.

    " We are in Rio de Jainero," he replied. Daniel started walking quickly again and he started looking around as if he were looking for something.
    We had landed in a street and it was full of people and cars. Daniel found what he was looking for and crossed the street, dragging me with him . We went into An alley and there he found the door he had been looking for. It was all black with golgen wings encrested into it. Daniel touch the two wings with his hand and the door flew open.

    Inside was all but what i expected. There were dozens of people in this place. A second look at them told me they werent just regular people, they were Angels. They were all beautiful people and all had a glow around them.

    Daniel kept walking without saying a word until we reach a room and he stepped inside, and i followed.
    Patch was already there with three other people. Two guys and a girl.

    " So this is Ale," said the girl with a sweet tone. She had long brown hair and big brown eyes. She wore two bright pink ribbons on her head.

    " This is Leliah" Daniel said, " and those two guys are Craig and Damon".

    I nodded in response and Leliah looked straight at Daniel.

    " I know why you are here. Patch here told me you were coming. Rebbeca is dangerous on her own, she does not need to be sent to be looking for you Daniel. Rebbeca was indeed sent, but it does not mean she herself is not looking for you now," Leliah said with dark eyes.

    " What can we do?" Daniel asked.

    " That, my friend, i can tell you," said Damon for the first time. Damon had short brown hair and green eyes. He seemed to me very ancient although he looked as if he was in his twenties.
    " You are to turn the girl," he said

    " Turn me in?" i asked scared looking at Daniel

    Damon gave me a fixed stared. But it was Craig who spoke up.
    " No, turn you into one of us," he said in almost a whisper.

    My mind raced as i thought About the possibility.
    " You mean... An.. An Angel?" i asked nervously.

    " Yes, indeed," interrupted Leliah. " You see once you are turned into one of us Carragen wont be able to do anything to you because Daniel wouldnt be breaking any rules," she said with a twisted smile.

    " I'm not going to take her humanity from her," Daniel said with gritted teeth,"

    " No. Daniel, do it," i said

    " Okay but you need to die first, sweety," that was Patch

    " what do you mean die?" i asked turning to Leliah whose brown hair seem to glow radiantly around her.

    " You have to die in his arms for you to be one of us," she said casually.

    I swallowed hard and thought about it. Hard and long.
    " Well what about the people i love?" i asked thinking of Juan.

    " You'd watch them grow old and die. One by one," said Patch with big eyes.

    I didnt want to leave Juan, he had been there for me when Daniel couldnt. Juan was my everything and i loved him. I couldnt give him up like that. But i was certain of only one thing. I'd love Daniel until the end of time and if i could spend eternity with him, i would do it. I would spend much of my time with Juan and then watch him die.

    " Okay, let's do it," i said with a tone of finalty.
     
  7. Omg!!!  angel turning time!
     
  8. Wow. This started out like a combination of two of my favorite books, and then took a completely different twist...I love it!
     
  9. Okay .. I've been thinking this for a long time but now it really really seems like the twilight saga and I love it !!!!!!!!
     
  10. what two books do you speak of...? i wanna read em!
     
  11. Well the two books i read was ' hush hush by becca fitzatrick and ' falle by lauren kate .. And thank u !
     
  12. This is so good :). It reminds me of fallen :). With the angels and even the same name. Thia is really good. I love it :) xx
     
  13. Yeah thats where i took the name
    From !
     
  14.  okay so this is the last chapter. I didnt know how to end it. Sorry guys ! Lets keep in mond that is was my first ! Soo here it is i dont like it. But i tried. And thanka for reading 

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    I have been changed. I am an Angel and i have been for fifteen years now. Me and Daniel are married and have a beautiful daughter who we named Cam. She is thirteen and still growing.
    As of Juan i stopped talking to him five years ago, he noticed i wasnt aging and started worrying saying i needed to see a doctor. I told him i'd be moving out of the country with Daniel and said i wouldnt be seeing him again. He was really sad and i cried all night with him. But i did it, i left the one that loved me.

    " I want to tight myself to you in every humanly way possible," i said to Daniel and gave him a kiss.

    I held his hand because i knew that whatever was to come i would endure it because i had him by my side now and forever.
    I was ready to go through an eternity with the only one i ever loved...
     
  15.  this is the conversation Juan and Ale had when she was saying goodbye 

    " Ten years have passed by Ale and you look the same. Havent you notice?" Juan said slowly.

    " No. I grew a white hair the other day and i plucked it out," i teased

    " I'm serious. Ale you need to see a special doctor. Maybe your hormones are off," he said worried

    " Juan we have been through this so many times that i cant even count," i said.

    Juan stood shut for awhile. A long while. And then he spoke ," Ale do you believe in supernatural stuff?"

    I swallowed before responding, " No, why would i? You believe in ghosts?" i asked.

    " Not ghosts. But vampires, werewolfs, angels, demons," he said looking at me.

    " you've been reading too much," i said and got up and left.

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    I avoided Juan for a whole week after that. Juan was smart and i knew he wasnt easly fool. I was scared i didnt know what to do. Juan would find out eventually.

    " What do you think i should do ?" i found myself asking Daniel, who was playing a hand game with Cam.

    " Leave him," he said flatly.
    Daniel never liked talking about Juan and since i did it too often he disliked him.

    "It isnt easy Daniel. I wouldnt just leave you," i said

    " Well he isnt me. Tell him you are leaving the country," he responded.

    I was annoyed by how easy Daniel made things sound. But that idea stuck to my head. And so i waited one more week to confront him.

    " Hi," he had said when i called him on the phone.
    I asked him if we could meet up in a cafe and he agreed.

    I was nervous and scared. I didnt know how to say bye to the only guy that was there with me for over twenty years.

    " Hey," i said and gave him a hug when i saw him standing

    " what's up " he asked eyeing me carefully.

    " Just wanted to see you," i shrugged

    " No. You have something to tell me. Now say it," he said coolly

    Juan had been mad at me for taking Daniel back with no questions. But i couldnt tell him the truth.

    " Me and Daniel are leaving the country with Cam," i finally said.

    Juan looked at me long and hard. He wiped a sweat on his forehead. He pushed his glasses up his nose. He folded his arms on his chest. And spoke, " Have a good trip".

    " That's it ?"

    " what else do you want me to say ?" he asked.
    But i could see it in his eyes, he was hurt.
    Tears began forming in my eyes but i quickly wiped them off.

    " Okay," i said and got up to leave. Juan followed me out the door and got in my car and motioned me to get in. He drove us to his apartment.
    I was crying the whole ride there. Once there he took me in his arms and took me inside.

    " I will miss you," he said and gave me a hug.

    " I love you," i said and began crying even more.

    He lift my head with his hand and looked at me in the eyes. " May i?" he asked.

    I nodded. Yes you may.

    Juan pulled in and kissed me.
    I kissed him back because i was never going to see him again. Because i was going to be an eternity with Daniel and if there was someone beside Daniel that i wanted to kiss, it was Juan.
    Juan pulled me closer to him and threw me on his bed. And i let him because i was loving the moment. We were both crying but i wanted to feel him. Juan began taking my clothes off and i helped him do it.
    And we made love to each other. It was something i had never experierenced. Juan was so gentle like he didnt want to hurt. And i enjoyed every moment of it. I didnt regret it.

    Next morning i woke up on his bed. I woke up alone. He was gone. I dressed up and went home.
    I Told Daniel what i had done. Daniel was upset but he said okay, let's get out.
    I was happy Daniel forgave me and so i wasted no time and We left to France. i never saw Juan again. But i knew He had not stopped loving me. And neither did i. ...
     
  16. Aww this is so sweet. I love it xx
     
  17. Thank u for reading
     
  18. Fallen and Hush, hush; both about angels
     
  19. I love this story, and I'm sad that it's over