A Demon Within

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *AdamGontier (01), May 29, 2012.

  1. All my readers should check out "Desperation." It's a detective/crime thing. It might even have some romance if I feel generous enough...
     
  2. I'm already second-paged...? :(
     
  3. Interesting story....
    I hope u continue... 
     
  4. Wow, somebody dug this up! I feel so honored. Ha :)
     
  5. Update soon ! I love your story ! :D
     
  6. 2 weeks have passed, I'm regaining strength. I'm still not as strong as I was. This human is growing on me, inadvertently I can't help but feel sorry for her having to deal with my ways.

    I hate being human, this emotion thing is not my thing. I lifted my arm and studied it. It was tan, strong looking, but I felt weak. Is this what being human is like, having such a limit in strength!

    "Are you feeling better?" Her calm voice innocently asked.

    "Yes. I'll never be the same though." I said gritting my teeth.

    "I'm sure you will be!" She said optimistically.

    "No, you have no idea." I said, hinting.

    That when I realized, I've got to show her why.

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    Oh my! :O
     
  7. I don't have much time, so here is my the longest update I have time for at the moment.
     
  8. Adam  great work. I knew your story would be popular, so keep going, I favor you 
    BUMP!
     
  9. Second page again.... Bump!
     
  10.  this is great