A Demon Within

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *AdamGontier (01), May 29, 2012.

  1. No, why would he do that  that's an adult "taking candy" from a white van...it makes no sense
     
  2. Thats my answer and I'm sticking to it whatever I know you hate me cuz the whole rp thing
     
  3. No no no no NO !!!! he should fall in love with her  great update
     
  4. It is awesome
     
  5. He should kill her because it's what he's programmed to do. Falling in love is far too cliché
    STRIVE TO BE YOURSELF!
     
  6.  NOOOOOOO don't kill her 
     
  7. Qin, I love your thinking! Ha
     
  8. As I reached my hand out to kill her with the power that I've always had, it wouldn't work. It was gone, I couldn't use it! It was terrible! This can't be happening!

    "What are you doing?" She asks so naïve.

    "Uh, nothing... Leave me be!"

    "I just saved your life, you'd think you'd be more grateful!" She said in the first irritant tone I've heard from her.

    No power, and I'm too injured to do it the regular way. Why do I not have my power? This must've been my punishment for yesterday. Wait, was it yesterday?

    "How long was I out!?" I asked in a rushed tone.

    "Three days." She said ever so calmly, losing her irritation.

    "Three days! Impossible!" I yelled.

    "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I screamed as loud as I could.

    "Quiet down... I know how you are feeling right now, get some rest..."

    "Rest!? Rest! How can I!? I'm injured, with an innocent, annoying human, and no power!"

    "You should really get some rest... I think you're having delusions."

    I tried to lift up my arm to lunge at her, but the searing pain cut through, and instantly I was down. I can't even move! I'll haft to wait until I heal.

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    Well, he's in quite a predicament now isn't he? What do you think will happen over the course of the next few updates?
     
  9. He'll fall in love lol bump
     
  10. I can already tell you that won't happen.
     
  11.  no he should fall in LOVE
     
  12. He will get his power back and kill the girl ?
     
  13. Me no like love in stories anymore...
     
  14. Why? 
     
  15. They're repetitive and all end up the same!