I could've gotten everyone a picture, but the sides are what got me, I had to resort to anime and manga
Did you like how I did the pictures? (I didn't) anyone have any thoughts on what could make it better?
>.> not the pictures themselves... Like how I put their picture above thier name once they were introduced, (I only did important characters)
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh. I didn't quite catch that part at the beginning, but as I read it I got it. Maybe you should make a character log at the beginning with the characters, and then put pictures in as action shots during the story. That way, we would already know how the characters look and their pictures wouldn't distract from the action of the story