Poorly written, repetitive language and I laughed more than anything. The amount of 'holy cow!'s I saw and variations of were ridiculous, that and the number of times his grey eyes burned or blazed with desire as she chewed her lower lip. It also wasn't particularly kinky or erotic. Neither was book two or as far as I'm into book 3.
And the 50 shades of grey I believe is supposed to relate to Christian grey's issues with his personal demons. He makes a comment about being 50 shades of **** up and it becomes ana's nickname for him.
I don't know much about it just that I've heard great reviews from friends of mine. I plan on picking up this book as soon as I can get my hands on it this summer. Hope I'm not disappointed.
no don't read it, I'm warning you it so terrible,I thought it was gonna be good but it just a badly written twilight fan fiction and it looks like it been written by a fricking 6th grader wrote .I don't recommend this book it a bad erotica book .Also the main character an idiot ,who non stops talk about her inner godess crap and the Grey guy just a twisted guy who needs to go to a mental institue
I read all three. The scenes really got me worked up.... In a good way. The writing was decent, not great.
I understand the whole grey metaphor crap, but I still think it was stressed far too much. She needs to learn some subtlety. I agree that the whole "inner goddess" talk was stupid, as well. Really, though, the entire novel reads like a high school freshman wrote it.
I was pointing it out for panda lol. And yeah I thought what I've read has been pretty naff so far. It's something that could have been any teenage girl's story.
"Holy cow!" "Holy ****!" That's all you ever see -.-... I think this book is a piece of crap, honestly, I bought it because people kept on talking about it and I thought i was going to have to read it in school so I said "why don't I get an early read!" turns out its some freaking mommy porn that's extremely poorly written this doesn't deserve to be on The New York Times Best Sellers! :roll: IM VIVID!
I am surprised to read so many negative comments about this book! I heard this book being boosted beyond what words can say... I finished it in two days and found it to be really addictive, it wasnt the best book i ever read, but it was intriguing... I am wondering if it is receiving so many negative on pimd due to the average age of the players!
Jules, age doesn't make a difference when looking at the writing. Content, yes, but not writing. I'm well over the average age of people playing this game and still find it to be awful.
I'm not reviewing it badly due to my age I'm an adult and I also said that I don't find it pervy either lol. It's billed as mummy porn but the style of writing suggests that it's aimed at a younger audience. Therefore perhaps they would find it really pervy. I don't know. Basically, handcuffs do not equal being a perv and it's not that much more hardcore than that lol.
Amanda, there are over ten sex scenes in that Goddamn book, from what I've heard. It's just not appropriate for someone my age.
Eh. Tried it. Maybe I'll read it again when I'm older. I have major problems with the sex scenes, except there were too much erotica in the pages. That, and I'm pretty sure minors aren't allowed to read it. ._.
Just don't read the damn book.It like a 6th grader seeing his first smut and writing it down.I'm burning my book and using the flames to makes smore'syummy.Everyone loves smore's.