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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Rhetorical, Jul 18, 2011.

  1. Keep writing!!
     
  2. Oh my god I let this fall to page 5 , update coming soon
     
  3. Chapter 15- Aimless Wandering

    "I am not supposed to exist," Forest muttered for the millionth time since we left the file room. He had been in some sort of a trance, not really saying anything besides that.

    We were walking aimlessly from town to town.

    "Forest, do you think that's why my mom hid me in the closet?" I asked him. No answer.

    It has been a year since Forest found me in that closet. Ever since then, life was constantly terrorizing. Yet still four more years to go.

    "What do you think life will be like for the next four years?" I asked Forest, trying to make conversation. Still no answer.

    Suddenly, Forest stopped walking and sat down, and stared in front of him.

    "Forest?" I asked him. He was daydreaming. Again. I waved my hand in front of his face. No response. I clapped my hands near his face. Still no response.

    "Jeez Forest," I said, laying down next to him. I soon was asleep.

    When I awoke, Forest was gone.
     
  4. Ohhhh snap!
     
  5. Please update you probably forgot about this story
     
  6. Sorry guys, I have to delete this app, anyone can continue this story, please make it.... good?sorry, Cant really find a word for the opposite of childish and immature without making it seem dirty... So bye everyone!
     
  7. SOMEONE CONTINUE IT!!
     
  8. Fiiiiine


    Chapter whatever

    "Forest! Forest!" I called into the distance. Why now? What did I do wrong?

    "Forest, come back!" I might as well be shouting this into an empty, soundproof room. Suddenly, I felt tired. Probably from the dizziness that I felt as soon as it sunk in.

    Forest was gone forever. He was not coming back. A tear rolled down my cheek. I'm alone, well for the next four years. Or was I?

    I was getting fat for the last couple months. Forest and I thought it was just that we've been pigging out at grocery stores every time we ate. What if it wasn't just fat?

    I scrambled out of the mattress i was sleeping in. The mattress must have been thrown out of a nearby house, because it was in the middle of the street.

    I ran to a drugstore, grabbed a couple tests.

    It could be possible. A couple months ago, Forest and I found a liquor that was left unscathed. We drank all we wanted and the night was a total blur.

    Positive. They were all positive. I didn't know if I was scared or happy. I started to laugh and cry at the same time. This was what Forest and I wanted, right? Now that we found out that people will be back in four years, what's the point?

    Raising a child will be hard. Little food when you're in hard-hit areas, and what about basic baby supplies? And most of all... What about the hyenas?

     I was never on.......
     
  9. Prologue-

    Ellysa gives birth to a daughter, and she names her Zella. Four years later, people start reappearing and acting all sweet and trusting.

    Then when Ellysa and Zella go shopping in the market one day, they see Forest. They all reunite and have a happily ever after. End of story, ok? Ba-bye now, time is of the essence
     
  10. Prologue-

    (the better one)

    Zella follows me through the crowd of shoppers.

    "Mommy? What happened to Daddy again?" she asks me.

    "I told you," I say for the thousandth time, "Daddy just left."

    "Oh," Zella replies.

    It had been four years since I have since seen Forest.

    "Pick out the apples you want, I'm making apple pie tonight," I say to Zella. Seeing people was still unbelievable, I pinch myself to make sure I'm not dreaming.

    "Okay, I'll pick out the best, juiciest ones!" She exclaims.

    "okay, but make sure you leave some for other people," I tell her as she rushes to the apple stand.

    "Ellysa?" Someone asks behind me. I turn around.

    "Don't you remember me? I'm Dr. Hill, haven't seen you since you were little, wow you've grown," He says. I recognize him.

    "It's been an interesting five years," I tell him.

    "Indeed it has," He replies. He knows that I never turned into a hyena. "Have you tried the mangoes yet? They're fantastic," He continues, holding up a half-eaten mango.

    "I'll have to try them," I say.

    "Well, better head off to the lab," Dr. Hill says, taking a bite out of his mango.

    "Okay, see ya," I say.

    "Bye, see you soon," He says as he walks off.

    "Mommy! Mommy! Look at the apples!" Zella says, holding up a bag with apples.

    "Those will make yummy apple pies!" I say to her.

    "Yum!" She says. I look at the people at the market. There are many people talking and extending gifts. People are friendlier than they were five years ago. I saw a face. I knew the face. I took a second look.

    "Forest," I breathe.

    The Official The End

    Thank you for reading
    special thanks to
    CheekyChloe for giving me inspiration
     
  11.  ok that's great. I am more satisfied now. 