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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Rhetorical, Jul 18, 2011.

  1. Sure... I don't really know how I'll do it (cause everyone else is supposed to be dead) but I'll find a way to fit you in
     
  2. Aww.... I typed another chapter and it said failed to post... I'll retype it later
     
  3. Plz continue I rlly like it
     
  4. I love your story!!! Very good:)
     
  5. This is really good! I love the plot so far. Keep it up. 
     
  6. Chapter 5- Enemy
    Forest and I decided to look for other survivors soon after eating. We checked every place a person might've been kept safe during whatever happened. We searched a house, then moved on to another one. It took time, but it helped us keep busy. When we finished a neighborhood, we moved on to the next and the next until none was left. When a whole town was searched, and no one was found, we wandered off into the country until we stumbled upon a new one. We hardly talked. "Ellysa?" Forest asked one day when we were shifting through what might've been a local supermarket. "What?" I replied. "Do we know each other enough yet?" he asked. "No, we need to know each other better, maybe in a year," I replied. "Oh..." he said with a sad face. When we finished looking through the supermarket, something hit me, why didn't we find any bodies and yet blood was splattered every where? The only answer I could come up with, gave me shivers. "Say, Forest, why do you think we haven't found any bodies?" I asked him. "Good observation, I guess I haven't thought about that," he replied. "Forest, I think they were eaten," I said shivering. Forest's eyes grew wide,"By what?" Then it came, it resembled a hyena and a large dog. It looked like what I imagined a chupacobra might look like. Whatever it was, it looked like it was capable of eating a human. "Forest," I said panicky, "I suggest we run." The canine was running after us by then, and following it was three others. When Forest turned around to look, he grabbed my wrist and ran. It was hard keeping up with him, but it was either be eaten alive, or run fast. I chose run fast. Me and Forest ran into the most stable-looking building. "Hello?" a voice said.
     
  7. I wanna be in it too 
     
  8. name:Hill
    desc: he is inteligent. He likes to help his people,
    he is a specialist with bombs, computers and any electrical devises
    aperiance: black hair: mojawck
    body:muscular
    favourite sidearm: shutgun!

    If you don't like anything in description just change it to what you like
     
  9. K, I'll try to add you
     
  10. I'm loving this story
     
  11. Chapter 6-Emma
    Forest and I looked around. We were standing in a kitchen that looked like a tornado went through. The fridge was tipped over, a counter top had a bite taken out of it, and a bunch of smashed china plates were laying on a table the only had three legs left. "Hello?" the voice said again, this time, Ellysa noted that the voice had a British accent. "Hi?" Forest answered. A girl about twelve years old came out of the cabinet under the sink. She had long, dark brown hair and brown eyes. As soon as she came out, Forest ran up to her and hugged her. "Who are you?" she asked Forest. "My name's Forest, what's yours?" Forest answered in a cutesy, baby voice. "I'm not four years old, my name is Emma," she replied. I could obviously tell she already disliked Forest. Forest started to back away from her. "Emma?Do you know what happened with everyone else?" I asked. "Yes, I watched with my own eyes. Mom shoved me in that cabinet and I peeked through a small hole. The hyenas came and made a huge mess. I saw them drag my Mom off, I think she was dead. I don't know what happened to Dad." "Oh...that must have been terrible!" I said, it was true, I couldn't have bared to see Mom or Dad being dragged off by a horrible canine. "It was," Emma replied. "You want to come with us?" I asked. "To where?" she asked. "Anywhere I guess," I replied. "Well, what do you want me to do? Wander around by myself? Duh, I want to join you!" Emma said.
     
  12. Nice can wait to see the part
    That I come in
     
  13. Well...... I really only wanted these three characters to be alive, sorry
     
  14. Don't Change the story line 4 new character i like the hyenas>:3
     
  15. Wait... I just had an idea, scratch that last comment
     
  16. Eh.....idk what I'll come up with, youll be in the story alive or dead
     
  17.  thanks tho