I've been reading this story since I first noticed it on fan fiction. I just want to say, I love this story more than any other on here I've read. It's a great story with a unique background. I've been back and forth on this story and working with mine non-stop. I hope to see another update when I pop back in here, . Keep up the good work!
Thanks lovies . I haven't found time.... Maybe today or tomorrow... Once I'm finished with summer classes . I'm going to California in about a month! I'll write plenty of updates on the plane ride!!!! ?
~~~~UPDATE!~~~~ Immediately after the first puff, I start coughing; I feel like my lungs are going to be ripped out of my body. Nathaniel comes over to pat my back. "It's okay, hun. Everyone starts off like that. You'll get used to it," Nathaniel rubs my back, soothingly. I take another puff and then inhale the smell. I don't cough this time, and blow it out smoothly. "See, Darla? You're getting used to it!" Ashlee says and hugs me. "Now, we just need you to get new clothes!" Rose says excitedly. "That's for tomorrow," Brooke puts her hands together excitedly. Great... Shopping... My favorite thing. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Darla, there's only one store in the mall that fits us. So we pretty much get all our clothes there," Rose says excitedly. For girls part of the outcast group, they do love shopping like the popular girls and the other girls. We walk into a store called, "Hannah's", with big, blocky letters. The inside looks dark and mysterious. We walk inside and are greeted by a long-haired guy that the other three girls seem to know. "Ash! Rose! Brooke! Hiya darlings," he says. "Hi Dave!" they exclaim. "Who's this?" he smiles, winking at me. "This is Darla; she passed the test and she's gonna hang with us now!" Brooke says. "Nice! It's about time you got a new girl," he winks at me again. "Anyway, she needs clothes," Ashlee says. "Come with me, sugar," he says and grabs my hand. He shows me around and chooses some clothes for me that Boss would approve of and that would also fit my style. I try on all the clothes and choose several outfits out of the ones Dave brought for me. "I'm done, can I buy these?" I ask Dave. "Course, hun. That'll be $25 dollars," Dave smiles. I hand him a crisp, twenty dollar bill and five singles and walk out the door with my new friends. We walk to the bathroom, so I can change into my new clothes. I put on a fringed off-shoulder and fitted jeans. "Darla! You look amazing! I love that shirt in you!" Rose gushes. "You look perfect!" Brooke says. This reminds me of the time I went shopping in the beginning of this year... So much has changed since then, but honestly, I'm glad it happened. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I put my key into the door and twist it to the right to open it. I open the door accidentally slamming it into the wall adjacent to it. "DARLA. How many times have I told you..." My mother comes running and then stops midway, "what in god's name are you wearin'?" "Clothes. What else would I be wearing?" I roll my eyes. "Treat your own mother with respect will you!" she yells. "Fine. What in god's name are you wearing?" I fire back. "Excuse me?" "I walked through the door and that's the first thing you said to me. Is that how you talk to someone when they first come in? I guess that's respectful to you, mother." I stomp up the stairs with my school bag and shopping bags filled with new clothes. I throw my stuff onto the chair I have in my room and lay on my bed. Knock, knock. Before I can answer with a 'come in', Danny barges right into my room and plops down next to me. "Nice clothes," he laughs, "it's like Drew hurled all over ya." "Oh thanks?" I respond. "Ooooooo! You went shopping today! Lemme see whatcha got!" he responds. He opens all my bags and looks at all my clothes with a purple face. With that, he puts it back into the bag and walks out the door. He walks back in quickly and says, "What's gotten into you?" Then he left. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's a bit short and boring, sorry . The next update should get a little better , maybe .