The Kidnappers Secret

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -iEmiHaveHimTrippinForDays, Dec 9, 2012.

  1. OMG the suspense is going to drive me crazy
     
  2. ^_^ expect an update later
     
  3. UPDATE!!!!! 
     
  4. Update
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    ***Ash's POV***

    "Ash I can't stop the bleeding. I think I hit an artery."

    "Jake why did you shoot her?! This was supposed to be just a joke but you took it too far!"

    "Ash shut up and help me. I can't lose her."

    "What do you want me to do?"

    "Talk to her and keep her awake."

    I couldn't believe Jake shot Kelsey. This went too far Kelsey was such a sweetheart. She didn't deserve this. I can't believe I was part of this. Annie was hoing to be devistated. I can't let Kelsey die. I have to do something. But what?

    "Come one Kelsey! Stay with me. It's me Ash."

    "I-I'm s-so c-cold"

    "I know come on Kelsey. You can pull through."

    "T-tell A-Annie I L-Love her"

    Tears weld up in my eyes. What have I done? Kelsey is dying right in front of my eyes. I took off my jacket and wrapped it around her. She was freezing, I looked into her eyes. She was struggling to hang onto her life. She's slowly slipping away.

    "T-Tell Momma A-Angel I love her and th-that I-Im sorry f-for not be-being a g-good dau-daughter"

    "Kelsey you can't die!"

    "I L-Love you Ja-Jake."

    I heart sank as I saw Kelsey take her last breathe after telling Jake she loves him. Tears fell onto the floor, I felt terrible. I glanced at Jake his face grim. Tears streaming down his face. He went pale, falling back he lifted his 9mm gun and raised it to his head.

    "What have I done!!!!!"

    "Jake no!!!!"

    I tried to pull the gun away from his hand. I noticed Annie was at the door staring in horror at her dead bestfriend.

    Bang!
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  5. Time for pixie to update
     
  6. BUMP!!!!!!
     
  7. BUMP IT NOW!!! DO IT NOW BEFORE MIDNIGHT PLZZ!! THIS IS SO FREAKING AWESOME!!!!! 
     
  8. Wow that escalated quickly
     
  9. Bump and update please please please :)
     
  10. Update! Sorry it took me so long!
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    ***Annie's POV***

    I stared at my best friend. Dead. On the floor. What the hell would I do without her??

    My mouth gaped open and tears formed in my eyes.

    " Jake, what the he have you bloody done!!!??" I screamed through my teeth and ran over to him making the gun drop out of his hands.

    " WHAT THE HELL HAVE YOU DONNE!!??" I grabbed his shirt and shook him around turning myself red with anger and tears now running down my face.

    " Annie!! Calm down I-" Ash turned me around so I faced him.

    " And you!! You said you were going to try and save her!! Protect her!! For me!!" I screamed and collapsed to the floor.

    " You both caused this. You are both going to pay for it. Forget about your dying love for me Ash. You just killed my best friend. The only girl that stayed by me no matter what. And you just stand there!! " I yelled in his face making him step back.

    " look An, I am sorry."

    " We'll sorry isn't good enough. Not this time. Defiantly not. " more tears streamed down my face.

    I went over and hugged Kelsey who was now pale as ever. I carefully shut her eyes using my fingers and gently slid my fingers down her cheeks where they had been wet from crying.

    " I love you" I whispered in her ear and rested my head on her shoulders.

    What am I going to do!? Without her, I am simply nothing.
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    ***Ash's POV***

    I stared at Annie hugging Kelsey. What the hell had I done. What the hell had jake done!?

    " You!! YOU!! IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT!!" I ran over to Jake and punched him forcing him to the ground.

    Now tears started forming in my eyes. Mostly of anger. At jake.

    " Why did you have to go and shoot her!! This was meant to be a bit of a joke!! Not a murder plan! " I walked away and sat in the corner or the room.

    Jake just stayed there. Lying on the floor saying nothing. How the hell could he have the guts to not even apologise.

    I stared at Annie. Still crying and hugging Kelsey. She hated me. I was never to be forgiven. What the hell had I done, it was Jake's fault! I tried to save her.. I- I wish I never did this.
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    Hope you like it

    Mays turn to update