POETRY

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by *nmc6779 (01), Jul 23, 2012.

  1. Oh hermes ahaha 
    Here's one about my love for basketball called for the love of the game

    Baskets taller than me.
    Courts shiny and smooth.
    Crowds cheering loudly and free.
    Cold water helps to soothe.
    The Spaulding ball hitting the floor.
    My heart begins to race,
    As this game does not bore.
    You can see the excitement in my face.
    The ball reaches my hands,
    I'm free for the shot.
    I shoot the ball hoping it lands.
    This is the moment in for which I fought.
    Sweat beats down my nose.
    Tension rises and the crowd is silent.
    The adrenaline grows.
    The crowds cheers grow pleasantly violent.
    The ball goes through the hoop.
    Swish.
    That's the game
     
  2. Wow you guys absoulutely wonderful better than mine

    I'm a bit self-conscience now 
     
  3. I don't like this thread anymore.
     
  4. This one was written quite abruptly. I was at work bored and had a few minutes to spare so I apologize for how terrible it is. 
     
  5. Why captain Jack?
     
  6. Please dont be afraid to comment on my terrible poetry! Hahaha! Just remember I tried! 
     
  7. It's not bad, I like the first one better though
     
  8. Basketball
     
  9. Well here's a third poem I'll post for the night if interested i'll post a few more tomorrow!
    This one is about a family member of mine that battled cancer!
    Survivor
    You were losing your hair.
    At the age of five.
    But you didn't care,
    You were trying to survive.
    The battle for life was so hard to fight.
    Fighting all day,
    And fighting every night.
    We did everything so you can stay.
    Seeing your pain hurt me most.
    Knowing I'm powerless in your fate.
    But you overcame it; let's have a toast!
    This news was absoulutely great.
    You're my warrior; beating cancer to a pulp.
    It's nice to see you looking well.
    Before you couldn't gulp.
    Now you got up from when you fell!
    You're my best friend as you can see
    So make me a promise.
    Make a promise just for me.
    Please do this Thomas.
    If the war for life comes ever again
    Keep fighting and fighting
    Until the end
     
  10. The last two aren't my best but I tried! They were made in a bit of a rush! I promise I won't rush them again!
     
  11.  I liked that one, very deep, personal, and inspirational
     
  12. Oh Side note the person I am talking about in that poem is not named Thomas that's a nickname for him because he loved Thomas the train 
     
  13. That one was nice :)
     
  14. Oh I see, I'm happy for Thomas
     
  15. I'm so glad you liked that one! I'll post a few more tomorrow if anyone is interested! I'll also be posting a short story to fanfiction! If anyone cares lol
    Well, it's 1 am and I should sleep so night xx
     
  16. I really like reading your poetry
     
  17. Last one was good bro.