my kind of love

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Shay1919, Jul 21, 2012.

  1. CHAPTER THREE-deciciding factors

    My best girl friend from preschool just happens to come to the school again well I'm not Gunna regret it "oh my gosh Keelie is that you" she said

    "uhm yeah" I said but I was wondering why was she at my house "won't you come in Angela I can show you my room and we can talk about stuff "

    "like yeah let's I think I remember where it is" She said

    She grabbed my arm and jerked me to my room shutting the door behind us "so what's up tell me everything" she said "I'm dating a killer he killed a girl from my school after I heard him talking to his dad" as I said that I started to cry with fear in my voice I said "I don't know what to do I am just so lost" she told me in a comforting voice "everything is going to be fine I'm here for you"
    I couldn't reply because I was crying so hard and she took me and embraced me in a gentle friendly hug rocking me trying to comfort me

    6:30 pm

    I get a call from jake and I don't know what to expect "Keelie I thinks it's time you know if you don't already" I was shaking about to cry because I knew what he was going to say or so I thought I did as he said in a shaky voice "Keelie I love you and I want to be with you forever but I can't for certain reasons and I think it's best we break up" and I was in rage so I screamed at him over the phone "YOUR A KILLER THAT'S WHY ISN'T IT I DON'T KNOW HOW LONG I HAVE KNOWN ITS BEEN A WHILE THOUGH I HERD THE CONVERSATION I HEARD YOUR FATHER TELL YOU TO KILL THAT GIRL AND I HEARD HIM TELL YOU TO KILL ME SO DON'T PLAY MISTER INNOCENT!!!" he replied in the most hurt but angry voice I have ever heard in one of his deepest tones "how many people know Keelie" "nobody I would tell to you jacob" I said sarcastically but annoyed and angry but he replied sadly "I will be over in a half hour and we will talk about this" I said scared but firm "you will not come over to this house because I forbid you from doing so and if you do I will just run away from you forever" he said in an almost crazy voice "oh you forbid me from doing so YOU FORBID ME EH!!! Well make that half hour now then look outside will you deary because your worst nightmare is almost here" then I heard a long beep as he hung up and it sounded like a hospital heart rate monitor gone flatline making me more nervous as I hung up the phone and I ran to my underwear drawer grabbing the large steak knife and him coming in with a pocket knife as I laughed at him and spoke "you expected me to be another one of your helpless girls didn't you you expected to just pin me and brutally murder me didn't you well it is the other way around because I am going to fight for my life" he started to chuckle as I felt a sharp pain in the hand my knife was in not releasing I looked down to see his knife in my arm so I pretended to loose all use of my arm as he came running at me I put my arm up at the last second shoving the blade through his stomach then his through his heart as I said in a sarcastic voice "is that how you planned it eh babe is that how you planned your death or was this a part of it"

    I will continue in the next chapter  but do keep reading
     
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  3. Awesome story, bump!
     
  4. woah she killed him! bumpp!
     
  5. Or did she it never said he died
     
  6. Making the update as I speak tho