Dream or Reality?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Jerk123123, Aug 14, 2013.

  1. don't get on your sister's nerves

    ?i actually made this one for my little sister though so that when she starts annoying me I could just read this dream to her....not that I would ever ever ever do anything like that to her.
     
  2. Here's another update! Hope you like it because there most likely wont be another till Thursday(no school due to a holiday!!)

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    After lunch I head back to my room to change and get ready for my three-hour exercise. I go into my closet and choose a black sports-suit with light-aqua stripes going down the sides. I pick a matching pair of socks (completely light-aqua) and throw on my sneakers.

    After I'm done changing I leave my room and go to the exercise facility. When I arrive, I scan the metal bracelet which I put on at breakfast and a list of exercise options pop up. Today my options are swimming, hiking, or rollerblading. A very hard decision since swimming and hiking are my favorite exercise options.

    I love swimming because all the swimming options are wonderful, we can swim and jump waves in the ocean (with no seaweed or litter floating around in it), we can swim in a lake if we choose to (I personally prefer the ocean because I like the salt water and adore jumping over waves), or we can go to a pool and swim laps for a bit and then just swim around for fun. Out of all these options, I'm pretty sure that swimming in the pool sounds the worst, but it really isn't. The water in the pool has no chlorine like the ones in our dreams, it has fresh, mineral water and I love how the water tastes when it accidentally gets in my mouth. The water is amazing! And also it's completely clear, it's beautiful and perfect in every way.

    I like hiking because I'm an adventurous and curious person. If we select hiking for our exercise, we get options of many different landscapes and environments that we can do for our hike. We can choose a forest with old willows, a rainforest with vines, a simple gravel path with flowers on the sides, a walk near a waterfall, a stroll through the meadow, a hike through a dessert... The options are practically endless. And what more, on these hikes we don't have to stay on any specific path, if I want, I can go off the path and get lost in the woods. Take random turns, see different animals, explore what is around the bend! I never know what I'll find. And when the three hours are over The hike will gradually end and I'll end up back in the exercise room, taking a drink and getting ready to change.

    I think I'm going to take a hike today. I click the hike option on the screen and then another list with different hikes pops up. I choose a hike in a mysteriously looking forest, and the computer tells me to go to room E54. I walk to the room, open the door, and take in the beauty of the place I chose for today.

    It's time to explore paradise.
     
  3. That sounds ahhhmazing.
     
  4. ?Ill update either today or tomorrow 
     
  5. ?sorry I haven't been updating, I have so much stuff at school, I'll try and update soon.
     
  6.  Nice story idea and well written. Love it.

    Would you mind walling me when you update? 
     
  7. Thanks, and yup, ill wall everyone.
     
  8. ?I will, soon, hopefully, ?im so swamped with school..... If it's any help, I've written the first 2 paragraphs already.
     
  9. Yayish I guess ?
     
  10. Yay?
     
  11. sorry. Ughhh! Okay, if someone like literally forces me off pimd till my homework is done after school today I might be able to do it today.
     
  12. HIDE YOUR PHONE THAT'S WHAT I DO
     
  13. I shouldor i should make it be out of battery so i couldn't get on.
     
  14. Yah u could do that
     
  15. Wheeee
    This story is amazing! 
    The deaths are scary cause i'm a bit too imaginative 
    But still, love it 
    Somehow mysterious and normal in same time 
     
  16. Thanks cinna


    Oh! And i finally finished writing the update! I don't know if i can post it now though because I need to check for mistakes and im brain dead cuz of all the cold medicine im on, but yeah expect it later tonight or tomorrow!
     
  17. Made it!

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    After my exercising session is done, I go back to my room to get ready for dinner. I take a quick shower, change, brush my hair and then head out the door.

    I go to the cafeteria to eat. Dinner starts and ends quickly as I wait in anticipation to tell Matt my plans. As soon as dinner ends I excuse myself, "I'm going to go take a walk", and head off to the hallway where I'm meeting Matt.

    I call it a hallway, but that's not exactly what it is. Where we are actually meeting is a secret room in the hallway. The room is secret because it's almost impossible to find. To get in, you have to trace the shape of the earth and all its continents on a painting which hangs in the middle of the hallway.

    I go up to the painting and begin tracing with my finger, North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Australia, Asia, and lastly, Antarctica. As my fingers leave the painting I can hear metals clinging within the wall. They seem to be hitting each other in a specific order. Clink-Clink-Clink, they clink in a circle. Once the clinking circle is complete I hear a lock turn behind the painting and then the wall starts to move.

    The entire wall doesn't move, but a large circle, the same shape as the earth, moves. It first goes into the wall, and then slides to the left until there is a large, circular opening.

    After the wall opens, I step inside and press a button on my left. The wall immediately closes and a pair of lights turn on.


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    This is probably really short and bad so im not going to wall anyone cuz its probably not worth it.


    Anyways, I thought this would be a good time to ask....

    What do you guys think will happen next? And What plan will they come up with? tell me your guesses and we'll see if you're right or not!