Dream or Reality?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Jerk123123, Aug 14, 2013.

  1. That reminds me of District 13 in The Hunger Games: Mockingjay.
     
  2. I got a few ideas like them having suits and a specific daily schedule from the movie The Island
     
  3. I'm sorry, but why does everything I see, hear and read relate to either Harry Potter or The Hunger Games?But seriously, in the third Hunger Games book, they have daily schedules printed on their arms.True story.
     
  4. I'm doing something similar-ish in this storyare you a mind reader?
     
  5.  PEOPLE ARE HORRIBLE WHEN THEY DO THIS TO GIRLS
     
  6. Im writing the next update, ?its going to be kinda short and boring, but the next one shouldn't be boring.
     
  7. Once I get to the breakfast area, I pick up a metal bracelet from the table near the computers and proceed to enter my ID number into the computer by the door. In an automatic voice, the computer says, "Good morning #3301 here is your schedule. Please proceed to section 3 for your breakfast."

    I press the metal bracelet to the center of the screen, and my schedule for today transfers onto the bracelet.

    I have one hour to eat and socialize, afterwards I am supposed to go back to my room and accurately record my dream. I will have one-and-a-half hours to do so. After the recording I am supposed to head to the liquid lounge for two hours. Next, I have one hour for lunch, followed by thirty minutes of changing and three hours of exercise. Finally, I have one hour to clean up and change back into my suit, and then one hour for dinner. After dinner, I am allowed to socialize with my friends and we can go wherever we want within our building until it is time for sleep.

    After I finish reading my schedule, I pick up a tray and proceed to my assigned section to pick up food.

    In each section there are different types of food based on what we should eat to stay healthy. Our section is assigned to us by a blood sample taken each night before we go to bed. Once our blood is taken it is analyzed to see what vitamins and nutrients we need in our systems. For some reason dreams are very important in our society and apparently, the healthier you are, the better your dreams are supposed to be.

    I choose a boiled egg, some fruits, a bowl of oatmeal, and a glass of orange juice for my breakfast. After I'm done picking out what I want I head over to the table with my best friends Sammi, Brooke, and Shane.

    Officially we don't have names, but after talking about our dreams, a group of us decided that we wanted to have names, we didn't want our only identification to be numbers, and anyways, names are much more creative and easier to say than a string of numbers. So one evening after dinner, me and my friends decided to name ourselves. Soon after, a few people found out and suddenly more and more people started making names for themselves.

    I go by the name of Alice.
     
  8. It's interesting. And...?I'm in it.
     
  9. you both are! I hope I spelled your name's right?
     
  10. After breakfast everyone heads to their own respective rooms to record their dreams. I don't know why we are supposed to write down our dreams, but for some reason The First Ones deem it very important. They say that we are The Elements and that it is crucial that our entire lives, even the ones in our dreams, be recorded.

    Most people don't question it, but I want to know why? Why are these dreams so important? Why do we spend our entire life focusing on our dreams? Most people pay no mind to this, but if you think about it, our life really does revolve around dreams. I mean, we have a special diet, we have long sessions to talk about dreams, we do rigorous exercise every day, we get our blood taken daily to ensure our good health, and what about that drink that we have to drink after dinner? What in the world is that for? You know what, I'm going to find out! Tonight I'm going to fake that I drank that juice, no one will ever know, except a few of my closest friends.

    I glance at the automatic clock in the corner of my desk and see that half-an-hour has passed, I have an hour to finish recording my dream. Recording shouldn't take too long though because Daisy had a short life, she only lived to be sixteen.

    I take my dream diary from my bookshelf, sit down at my desk and begin writing.

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    Sorry this was so short, I'm hoping that the next one will be longer
     
  11. You did spell it right.
     
  12. Good stuff keep it up
     
  13. This is just brill! I am very interested and I just want to see more of this. It's actually got some really good details despite some of the smaller updates. Very amazing! I will be lurking as I always do, but I promise I will be reading.
     
  14. thanks!
     
  15. Mags writes? 
     
  16. ?i guess, why is that surprising?
     
  17. No, it's jus weird to me when someone who usually sticks to other areas in forums come to fan fic.