The Break Of Dawn

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -_Devestator_-, Dec 1, 2012.

  1. >:3 FIRST ON PAGE 3!!! AND WHAT!
     
  2. I was so startled I jumped backward and fell to the floor. My dad looked at the window and squatted down beside me. I looked terrified something that doesn't happen often.

    I shook my head and looked again and she was gone. Sarah came and hugged me and began sobbing. I just got up and walked to the door.

    "I'm going to take a walk I need the fresh air." I said walking out the door.

    I walked all the way to the park and sat on a bench. I wondered if I will ever be cured of my disease. And it was the worst one any person could have...it was a disease that made me see dead ppl that I loved in my dreams and in hallucinations.

    When I started to get up something pulled me back down on the bench. I could hear a low whisper.

    "go to....the house....where your....mom once lived" it said almost ghoulish.

    I got up and ran to my car. I jumped in and turned it on. I drove to 110 Street St. When I got there I sighed and got out of my car. When I did something lunged at me and dragged me inside.

    "AAHHHHHHH!!!! HELP!!!!!!!"

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    Did you like the joke? '110 Street St.'
     
  3. ^_^ BUMP!!!! And i dont get it 
     
  4. What don't you get?
     
  5. '110 Street Street' without the abbreviation
     
  6. BUMP 0.0 I don't get the joke lol
     
  7. Do you guys like it do far?
     
  8. I don't like it Troy, I LOVE IT!!!!
     
  9. I'm updating tmr
     
  10. O.O wow this is very.....interesting...BUMP I love it ^-^
     
  11. I looked around but I couldn't see anything because I was in total darkness. I reached for my phone and turned it on. I had no reception and it was almost dead.

    "Hello?" I said into the dark void

    "Hello....I....must....show....you....the.....way" the ghoul said again.

    I got up and felt a cold breeze of air on my hand. I grasped it and followed the low green light. When we got to our destination the ghoul stopped and pointed at a room that was lit up. I walked to it and looked inside a large wooden door.

    What I saw was horrible I almost broke down and cried but I held my ground and stood firm. What I was looking at made me kinda die inside. I knew about this place...I saw it once in my dreams. The Hall Of Determination. It is a place where mortals go to a ghouls palace and fight for a love that was lost.

    It was just like the Greek myth of the man who lost his wife and went into the Underworld to get her. But I had no idea why I was here. Then I saw it....her actually....it was Sarah.....

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    Sorry I didn't update sooner guys  But here is one! 
     
  12. It's ok ^-^ bump!