THE STORY OF MY MURDER

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *izzy_wizzy (01), Jun 22, 2012.

  1. UPDATE JODIE 
     
  2.  I really like the story, so I want it ASAP.
     
  3. Ok I will update xo
     
  4. I was puzzled by the blood stopping at the wall, my beloved parents were gone... But where?
    I started to gently move my hands around the wall until I felt a small space on the wall... I pushed it and a small fragment of the wall moved as a hidden door in the wall swung open .
     
  5.  No way!
    Bump!
     
  6. As I timidly stepped into a hidden room I spotted out two figures, a girl and a boy.
    I stared at them waiting for my eyes to adjust then I asked
    "who are you and were are my parents?"
    The girl replied
    "I'm Carla and this is William, your parents are in the attic..."
    Then the boy named William interrupted
    "don't go up there, he... He is up there too. If you go up there... He... He will get you too"
    "wait who is he?"I blurted out.
    Carla and william looked at each other as William replied
    "the man who killed us!"
    His voice was shaky and ruff
    I heard a strong and over powering scream as the two people disappeared leaving two rotten and bloody bodies.
    I was so confused.
     
  7. Sorry for the short update
     
  8.  don't worry darling, I'm your #1 fan at this, so when you update, I am grateful. Wish I had that in my forum  oh well.
    Anyway, BUMP TO THE MAX!
     
  9. My forum is completely dead, no one comments, it's lonely 
    But it was fun, though I don't update anymore, no one encourages lol
     
  10. But you got me!  so your A ok
     
  11.  Furthermore, i shall shut up, and demand another update!
    Bump! Lol
     
  12. What's your forum?I will update soon
     
  13. Spiked Tears. I think its on page 4 But if your gonna read it, thank you!
    Muah you are an angel 
     
  14. I will update soon xx
     
  15. Where is that update!
    Bump!
     
  16. 
     
  17. I'm sorry Jodie ----->I'm just crazy on your story!