PIMD : STORY TIME OH YEA!!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by ExTaSy6, Mar 15, 2011.

  1. Yea so do i

    Im going to try to write the next part at work shhh dont tell my boss
     
  2. OMG THIS STORY ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME
     
  3. It's like my real life story in pimd but I never caught with mys 
     
  4. Add me dude I actually like it
     
  5. Haha i absoultey LUV IT!
     
  6. Tay Tay is hot  i like it that way 
     
  7. Apoc and mysterious continued rolling around until apoc got up. He had it with mysterious and started kicking him over and over again, until mysterious lifted apocs foot when he tried to kick him and threw him on his back.

    Blizzard couldn't stand to watch them fight. He shook his head in disgust and tried to find CJS.

    " where you going dude?" cyber asked while trying not to peel his eyes off the fight. Ninz had jumped in trying to break them up and was now holding onto mysterious's leg.

    " i'm not going to let these two kill one another, it's getting insane" blizzard responded as he pointed to the campus cheering on the fight. " they even started betting and the fight just started".

    " aww come on don't ruin the only entertainment we've had in awhile!" cyber cried out. Blizzard realized it was true and gave up.

    " well if you won't say something i will. Apoc is not going to get hurt anymore" taylor said furiously storming off.

    " where the hell she come from" cyber asked surprised. " i have no idea...OOOH DID YOU SEE THAT!!" blizzard yelled. " noo what i miss , dang it taylor " cyber yelled in fury.

    Nana had tackled apoc out of nowhere and was now pinning him down. " this is for qin, you stay away from my girl you hear me , you stay away from her before i beat you to a pulp" nana yelled.


    Qin, who had been talking to trick and naomi ,about the fight was now peering over trick's shoulder to watch.
    She smiled at her hero. Nana was hers and everyone thought she liked trick, what were they thinking?.

    " omg qin he just like defended your honor" naomi gushed." i knoooow omg he is just so hot" qin said smiling.

    CJS and trawda had arrived and finally broken up the fight. CJS was fuming from being interrupted, while in the middle of a lunch date with his girlfriend MCJS. He pulled nana off apoc, while trawda pulled mysterious away as well.

    " now someone please explain to me , why the hell you three are fighting?, and it better be worth it " CJS said with a menacing look in his eye.

    Apoc spoke up first." i lost it CJS and i'm sorry, it's just that mysterious was provoking me" apoc said his head down.

    " that doesn't mean you have to attack him" trawda said patiently.

    " the guy is just jealous about my friendship with ninz is all" mysterious teased.

    " and i jumped in well because i love qin and no one hurts my girl!!" nana said angrily.

    " oh god i want to bang my head against a wall" CJS said suddenly

    " go back to MCJS , i got this" trawda said" EVERYONE MOVE ALONG PLEASE" he yelled to the campus.

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    more tomorrow 
     
  8. Woo! Not bad!
     
  9. Lol thx but ive written better, i just don't know if i should put them up for copyright reasons, i want to become a writer if everything else fails...it's my passion
     
  10. *Wants more*!!!
     
  11. GAH NO FAIR I GOT DOUBLE TEAMED
     
  12. Lol. Too bad Apoc. Heh
     
  13. Like but why did u make look like a bad guy. :oops:
     
  14. Cyber u werent bad lol
     
  15. Dude can I please be in it
     
  16. Sure charlie