PIMD : STORY TIME OH YEA!!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by ExTaSy6, Mar 15, 2011.

  1. Omg guys im sorry i'll write it... I just got super sick ...still am sadly , but i'll do it
     
  2. Sophie didn't like how this was going. She could feel it ...everything was going to be ruined if she didn't warn the others. She turned the corner and watched fletch walking. He was too busy texting so he didn't see the two dark figures as they each grabbed and arm. fletch was caught off gaurd but he made up for lost time. He rammed his into one of the figures chest knocking the person down. Sophie gasped in horror. Fletch pushed the other away and walked to the figure on the floor.

    Sophie ran and saw a chance to attack him. Quickly grabbing a nearby twig from the floor she wacked him. Fletch slumped over and collasped. The two figures lowered their heads.

    " did i not warn you to be quiet with this whole operation!!" sophie yelled

    The two dark figures nodded their heads. sophie sighed and waved her hand at them.

    " we have a room full of eye witnesses that saw you attack danzo, and there going to be poking around now so fix it before i fix it" sophie grunted angrily

    The two disappeared with fletch into the darkness. Sophie shook her head and continued walking but then stopped.

    " oh and epic, if i catch you snooping around again , you'll be next" she said over her shoulder and walked away. Epic who had been hiding gasped in surprise and ran away.
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    more 2m guys 
     
  3. Damn a lot of mistakes but i was sleepy 
     
  4. MORE!!!!!!!!
     
  5. Next update in a few hrs
     
  6. Im the noob right?
     
  7. Can the noob or me!, be a main character
     
  8. Ooh it's prob to late to be In the story now right? Crap
     
  9. Wow!!! This story rocks my socks off!! Seriously lol
     
  10. Apo grinned a pretty toothy smile as he got his hand free. Mysterious smiled back , danzo was just as happy but stopped as they carried fletch in.

    " tell us who you are" mysterious demanded " and what do you want?"

    " you will see" one of the dark figures said " very soon"

    The figures walked out , locking the room behind them. nana stared at fletch confused.

    " is that everyone then? Why are they doing this?" he said pissed off

    " i dont know but im not trying to find out " apoc said and showed off his free hand.

    " ok apoc nows the time, remember the plan " mysterious said to all the guys

    They nodded their heads. Apoc was able to free his hand. He got up and as quickly as he could, he helped untie the guys. everyone was free but they pretended not to be. The plan was ready.

    " ready guys" danzo asked
    " wait , i gotta wake up fletch" apoc said , he started smacking fletch. Fletch woke up and grilled apoc.

    " sorry , you can punch me later, right now we need to fill you in" apoc said and which they all told fletch the plan.

    " im in" fletch said and motioned to danzo.

    " ok here it goes...AAHHHHH" danzo cried in pain and then fell over with his chair.

    Mysterious and the others quickly yelled" danzo!", they continued until a dark figure came in.

    " whats going on?"

    "Danzo just collasped" nana said

    The dark figure walked ouver to danzo and checked his pulse. Tje figure was about to get up when danzo opened his eye.

    " gotcha" danzo laughed
    " what the- " the figure never finished , the others attacked and knocked the figure out.


    ,,,,,, next update soon
     
  11. So many mistakes! @.@ I'm going crazy!
     
  12. It better be soon! Cuz I'm dying to see if my ingenious plan :)
     
  13. Apoc i write these when im about to fall asleep, im half awake so shhh
     
  14. *GASP!!!!!* I was caught! My secret plan is ruined!
     
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