The night

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Charlie-Bush (01), Jul 4, 2012.

  1.  Charlie, you know what my wish is? Is to do a COLLAB with you  Yeah, and yes, your a better writer than me, just admit it. And I love it lol bump, but add detail, it ties the story a bit more. Like- The hide glistened off my tinged arm, sending erupting burning waves causing my hair to get stand up straight, giving distant warning. Ok not too much, that's just me being an idiot ok? Remember this, as advice- Sky is always the idiot.
     
  2.  I'm sorry, my head is booming.
     
  3. Buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmp.
     
  4. Lol ok I will but after I'm done playin in water
     
  5. This story gives me gooseBUMPs
     
  6. So you like it
     
  7.  I love it, if it comes out in stores, I'll buy it.
     
  8. This is amazing so far BUMP
     
  9. Thnx I will soon I'm going to sleep for a couple hours first
     
  10. Ok goodnight darling 
     
  11. I'm back I'll update in a couple minutes.
     
  12. Update
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    The next time I woke I was laying on my plush green couch with a wet towel over my face.

    "Hey your finally awake" my dad said whe he saw I opened my eyes

    "yea what happened I thought the guy grabbed me and I was a gone forever?"

    "No thank goodness someone was there to help you they got the guy and saved you" my dad had a worry face on but underneath it looked like he was mad about something.

    "Dad your hiding something from me" I said cautiously.

    He looked down and now I saw sadness "please don't ask about anything,I'm begging you your just not ready for that world yet" and then he stomped away leaving me thinking about what he just said.

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    A few days later

    So it turned out I needed several stitches from falling on my head. Me and my dad hasn't talked normaly for days.

    "Dad can you please at least look at me?" I begged one day.

    He looked at me "do you need something?"

    I took a deep breath, it was time to get answers. We were sitting in our little kitchen that had wooden floors and cabinets. It was our little hut and I was about to destroy the peace in it with one simple question.







    "Am I a lost princess of another world?" my dad dropped his plate where it shattered on the floor and he stood there shocked.

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    Here's another update hope you like
     
  13.  its so good!
    ._. Bump to the heavens
     
  14. To the heavans
     
  15. I'll update in a few hold on
     
  16. Yes  Gilmore isn't updating, I'm worried.
     
  17. Update
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    Charlie's POV

    It seemed to take forever until the plate crashed and landed on the floor. But I guess I would have preferred the plate to stay afloat cause that's when John unfrozed.

    "where did hear that?" he asked in a kind of breathless voice.

    I replied in a whisper "That nightmare I've been having is this girl name Yue and a evil person talking about me being hidden in a different world and me being a princess."

    John stared there shocked, I counted the seconds until he moved again.

    20 seconds later he said "It's true,you are a princess and I'm hear to guard you. But I never knew he would find you when your still do young." He looked so helpless.

    "I'm not a little girl I'm 10,I should have been told this earlier" I said a bit angrily.

    "Charlie if you would have known he would have found you sooner, but I think it's time since you know for you to go back to your kingdom with your mom."

    I stared shocked at him,I thought my parents died and now I'm being told they are queen and king? How weird is that.

    "How will we get there?" I asked skeptically.

    "Why we use magic." He actually smiled! "Come on hold my hand"

    When I grabbed his hand the whole world started rippling and every color you could imagine was showing up.

    It was really beautiful,the colors were coming together and going apart but too soon everything stopped.

    And I was staring at a magical kingdom, it was large and the castle was a startling blue.

    "Is this mine?" I asked quietly.

    He replied with " welcome to your home"

    I couldn't believe my eyes.

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    Well heres the update
     
  18. Hey toxic it's in the heavens
     
  19. HEAVENS GRACIOUS I WANNA LIVE THERE 
    OH MY PHESE IT'S BEAUTIFUL!