Each Coming Night

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Dec 28, 2011.

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    I was taken off gaurd by his sudden question, and swiftly turned away to hide my red, flushed face.

    "Tell me??" He pleaded

    "Ughh- err.." I squeaked.

    He raised an eyebrow and shushed me. "Write it down.." He pushed a notebook at me. THANK GOD he didn't open it up to the page where I had scribbled his name and placed hearts around it.

    I hesitated and looked up to Ryan, and he encouraged me to continue.
    I slowly took the pen and wrote a Y-E-S.

    I handed him the book and he looked at me unsure. I told him to tell me the same.

    He scribbled out a "yes" in his sloppy handwriting.

    I almost screamed in shock.

    The guy i'd loved for 5 years liked me too. I could've died.

    "So..." He whispered.

    "Ill go get us sone kool-aid... I skipped into the kitchen and poured to tall glasses of cherry kool-aid.

    I walked back into my room and sat on the bed. He raised his glass in a toast to me and our glasses clanged Lloyd enough to wake my parents and my brother.

    "You know that means we're gonna get married right??" He smiled.

    I was in such shock that I just whispered "Awesome."

    He set his glass down beside me and I did the same. He looked deep into my eyes. His blue eyes were magnets to mine. I couldn't turn away. He was everything to me right then and there.. Hell he still is...

    He brushed his hand onto my pallid skin, and I drank in the feeling.

    I had a deep feeling in me. It burned and tingled in my chest. My throat was choked up and my whole body felt numb.

    He looked at me and noticed how stunned I was. He brushed some hair out of my face and came all but closer to my lips. I was screaming "KISSS HIMMM !" In my head

    Finally, he made the move.

    Our lips touched, like static, like magic. I was falling in love, fast.
    My stomach heaved forward, tickling and bouncing. I almost felt sick. A good kind of sick. It was like the entire world revolved around us at that moment, when our hearts mingled as one.

    He pulled away, breathless. I was too though. We didn't speak, only kissed again.

    Fireworks. Sparks. A light from heaven. If this was true love, then I'd die just to have a minute more of it.

    "Did you feel that?" He spoke softly into my ear.

    "Yes.." I smiled uncontrollably.

    He leaned in and kissed me again.


    We kissed a few more times. Each time more intense.

    I laid beside him on my small, twin sized bed, and fell asleep in his arms.

    He was the love of my life.

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     ughh. I hate this story.
     
  2. Why? It's amazing! 