Same as Qin (Happiness_Sadness). I was about to say proof-read first and don't use emoji... There's potential in this, and it IS original.
This is what I like: Fantasy, good grammar, great spelling and capitalization, you also say what's going on and explain what's happening, I LOVE it!
UPDATE!!! Hope u like it <><><><><><><><><><><><><><> The Rules. Pt1 Zeus POV As my lovely wife Aphrodite finished her joke I could hear thundering footsteps approaching. For a teenager she sure could stomp loud. "Here comes trouble" I said to Aphrodite She smiled and shook her head "Why are you making me go to High School??? I don't want to go!! I won't!!!!!!"Grace screamed at me with her long hair flying around her face. Gods she is so dramatic. If she wanted to be the next ruler of the world(after I retire to some private island of course) she is going to have to Calm Down! That's why high school will be good for her. It make her more calm and allow her leadership abilities to grow. "You will go or I will make you mortal for 300 eons and take away your powers for even longer!" I said angrily! Grace turned pale and she looked like she was going to faint. That will teach her to question my authority. She couldn't live without her "precious powers" for a day. Heck when I was young, you had to go without your powers for days. Now that was hard. "You will take all four years of highschool. You will have straight A's and you WILL NOT get into any sort of trouble AT ALL!!" When I said these words the there was a thunder clap and a lightning bolt that added some nice effects. Grace nodded her head in compliance, but I could tell she did not agree. She started to walk away but I summoned her back and said, "You will also not have any sort of relationship with a boy. I absolutely forbid it. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><> hope you liked it!! sorry if there are some minor mistakes. I broke my finger and have a cast so I can't hold my phone correctly! Yay! Comments and critiques are welcome! Also will update later or tomorrow <3 Ali
!UPDATE!(again lol) <><><><><><><><><><><><><><> As the preposterous list of rules grew and grew, I stared at my father in disbelief. I couldn't influence humans, couldn't use my powers for evil, couldn't do drugs or break any human laws. How am I supposed to have fun NOW? Not to mention I have to play stupid in all of my classes. "Fine,"I said snarkily, "When do I leave?" "Tommorow morning", Dad said, looking pissed off and angry. Haha I'm making his blood pressure rise! I know what will make it worse. "Oh wait", I said to my father, "can I still shop on Earth?". As I said this my father turned purple with rage. "YOU ARE SO SHALLOW AND FRIVILOUS! WHY DOES IT MATTER WHAT YOU LOOK LIKE? IT'S NOT LIKE YOUR THERE TO STAY!!! YOU SHOULD BE HAPPY I AM PROVIDING YOU WITH A PLACE TO LIVE!!!," his voice boomed from the heavens as he screamed down at me. As you can see my father has some anger issues "Zeus, Honey.... It's important to look your best at all times. Everyone on Earth follows this rule, especially high schoolers. They are particularly viscous and judgemental!", Aphrodite said comfortingly to Zeus. She turned to me and said "Yes you can shop honey. You can also bring one thing from your room to take with you along with your clothes." I ran up to her and hugged her and then my dad. After my dad unwillingly and stiffly hugged me, I ran upstairs and went to my room to pack for my new life. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><> Hey! Hope you enjoyed!!! Leave comments and suggestions and bumps below!!<333333 <3Ali