Update: Glaring Daniel broke yet another chalk stick. Nick had told him about Aliza and that stupid boy Hunter holding hands... him touching her as if she belonged to him. Alize was his and no child would ever take that away from him. Just as if it couldn't get any worse Julie walked in with a spandex black dess on, hugging all of her curves and long boots that made her silky legs seem endless. Her eyes peirced his and a small smile formed on her lips when she noticed him giving her a very slow once over. "I came in-" She stopped mid sentence when Daniel crossed the room locking and shutting the door. "What are you doing?" Julie's voice became excited at the thought of what he was planning to do... but when he turned to face her his Amber Eyes where shattered, Dead. Not those of a man filled with lust. "It's true then..." She whispered softly, mostly to herself. "You and Aliza... You two are together." Julie sighed and hopped onto his desk knowing how it made her dress rose up to her upper thighs temptingly... and she also noticed how Daniel's eyes followed the dress. His whisper so hoarse she almost didnt hear it. "Are they..." Her nod was all he needed. Daniel took two quick strides over to her and shoved his way between her legs holding her back tightly to him pulling her head back by a tug of her hair to kiss own her throat in a burning trail. This is what she had always wanted the moment he had laid his hands on her at dinner. To feel his lips again on her skin. Daniel didn't seem to be satisfied with just her neck and soon slid a hand up her dress and the one wrapped in her hair o her back pulling her closer to him kissing her desperately trying to wash away what ever it was he had had with that child. She knew that she was a woman. Something that Aliza still had to grow into. Hunter would be fine for her, he was still growing too. Not like Daniel, he was a man and she knew it, she could feel it. "I don't have a class next period..." She whispered against his lips softly. Daniel paused and then picked her up to push her against a wall away from the door his eyes now broken and desperate. She knew that for once it wasnt the look that mean had that meant they were desperate for her... Daniels was just desperate to forget. Julie was willing to make that happen. Then as if the fire had been snapped from the room Daniel set her down and turned away buckeling his pants where her talented fingers had gotten them open, tucking hid shirt. "I won't make the same mistake... I love her. I won't do that. I'm sorry Julie." She couldn't believe it. She had been turned own again. Pulling her dress back down from het hips and running her fingers through her hair, Julie left quickly not looking back. Daniel watched her leave and sighed kicking a chair across the room in anger. Only to hear a scared squeak. Turning around quickly Daniel saw Aliza standig in the doorway. Her books clutched at her chest and her eyes red. From crying. "Hunter saw... me and you... He knows... I hade to. I'm so sorry." With that she crumpled to he floor sobbing. Daniel caught her and sat her in his chair now regretting everything that he had done in a wild anger. "Don't be, Aliza non of this is your fault. Non." He kissed her forehead softly shushing her. "I am so sorry Daniel.. I just loveyou so much I coul-" He cut her off placing his hand on her cheek. " You love me?" She nodded confused slightly. "Of course I do..." Daniel smiled and crushed his lips to hers ligtly before standing up and turning around running a hand through his hair smiling. Aliza watched a small smile playing on her just kissed lips and whispers again playfully. "I love you.. I love you so much." Daniel spind around and grabs her spinning her in a hug laughing. "God I love you too.. You are my world. My only Love. I don't know what I would do with out you Aliza." They spent that free period telling each other how much they loved each other, forgeting about everything else that was still wrong in there lives. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry it took so long haha I love you All though Keep reading... HORRIBLE WRITERS BLOCK so don't be too mad at this post if y'all are haha
Gina sat under a tree just outside the school music room. She had slipped her head phones out of her book bag. Fiddling with the cord while hooking them up to her CD player. It took not even a minute, for her ears to be blasted by the sound of music. She leaned her head back against the tree. Her grey blue eyes gazed up at the gray clouds above. Funny how quickly a day could just go to hell. She released a light sigh and slowly closed her eyes. She didn't want to think about it anymore. If there was a place for her to hide her broken heart. She hoped to find it and bury her heart from being hurt again. Hunter let Aliza wander off by herself. After it took her five minutes just to convince him. She wanted to talk to her English teacher. Who was he to deny her that? He tossed his book bag over his left shoulder. His walk led him outside, as he massaged his temples in aggravation. He was already thinking about her again. Guilt had a way of eating away at people. Worming its thoughts in to people's heads. It made us make mistakes and sometimes fix them if they were fixable. He didn't see the tree trunk in his path. Not until his foot caught behind it and forced his face to kiss the ground. He groaned and sat up slowly. Brushing off any dirt and grabbing his bag. That's when he noticed the blonde hair. The way it curved around her face and traveled down past her shoulders. He blinked twice and slowly moved to get a closer look. He couldn't be sure if he was dreaming or not. Gina frowned while listening to her music. Her grey blue eyes remained closed. Even as she caught on to the feeling that she was being watched. It took a light touch brushing her hair away from her face. Her eyes snapped open to see Hunter crouched in front of her. His hand daringly close to her cheek. She narrowed her eyes at him. Grabbing her bag and CD player, then got up. She had to put distance between them and fast. After shoving her CD player in to her bag. She made quick work of fixing her hair and moving to go back in to school. A hand caught her arm before she could go far. Hunter gazes back at her angry eyes, " Gina wait-", he began to say but she cut him off. " I don't need to hear it. I've seen enough, please let me go. ", She replied back cooly and tugged to her arm out of his grip. Her heart was aching and she wanted to find a new place to hide. Her lungs were on fire as she held her breath. Just to keep from tearing up in front of him. She's be damned to let him see the damage he caused. Hunter growled lightly in frustration. He couldn't let her go, he wanted her to understand. But he was also being selfish for holding her back. She didn't want him anymore, and to his surprise. It hurt. He pulled her towards him and pinned her against the tree. His lips pressing against hers gently at first. Even as she protested and pushed against him to get away. He refused her simple request and cupped her face in his hands. His lips burned against hers. Smiling slightly when she responded a little to his kiss. His eyes closed while he held her there. Aliza was still busy with her errands in school. He would catch up with her later. He felt his heart warm at Gina's nearness. Then slowly he pulled back, " I won't let you avoid me. It doesn't have to be like this, Gina. ", He whispered softly to her. His spring green eyes gazing in to her grey blue ones. Gina shivered and shoved him away. She barely collected her thoughts. How dare he force himself on her like that. She slapped him and ran off back in to the school. Her book bag had been dropped on the ground. No thanks to Hunter backing her against the tree. She located a girls bathroom down the hall from the back entrance. Quickly entering it and finding a empty stall. She shut herself in and slid to the floor. Her arms wrapped around her knees and her face buried in them. The tears burned as they fell from her eyes. Hunter watched her run from him. He felt even worse now, everything he did seem to hurt her more. His fist connected with the tree. He stayed still, until his eyes caught the bright green book bag left abandoned on the ground. Gina. He took a deep breath and picked it up. Walking back in to the school, he figured he'd see her in next class. He would hand her the book bag then. Ms. Nunez walked the hallways quietly. Her lips quivered, having been kissed red. She touched them lightly with her fingertips. She was ignorant enough to think he would change his mind. She still couldn't believe he preferred a younger woman over her. A student of his no less! She brushed her bangs from her eyes. Nearly missing the gentleman that she bumped shoulders with. Her gaze shifted up, " I-I'm so sorry, I wasn't looking where I was going. ", She stated simply, her eyes apologetic. Nick chuckled at her and placed a hand on her shoulder, " It's quite alright, Julie. My, don't you look like you could use a cup of coffee. Is everything alright? ", He inquired in concern. Julie looked down to avoid his gaze, " Uh..yea..just kinda tired I guess. ", She replied softly to him. Nick nodded and put an arm around her. Leading her towards the teachers lounge, " Come on, I just made a fresh pot. Can't have you teaching next period looking like that. ", He said with a warm smile. Julie lifted her gaze to look at him in slight bewilderment. Of all people, he was the one to help her back on to her feet. He was a good person, she thought to herself.
Mel's Review Station Story: The Destines Intertwine for You Written by: jennete and Snow Extra Information: Review done after reading page 4. Originality~ Impressive to say the least, although it is another story about student-teacher relationships this one also involves the depth of jealousy, testing of friendships and trust within it. With the addition of these details it makes for a eager read and puts a new spin on the genre. Interest~ The story is one that I wouldn't be fond to read if I first knew what is was about but I was pleasantly surprised at how much I enjoyed it and kept reading. With the challenges put towards the teacher because of his relationship with the student, how should he react to certain situations he found himself and the true test of loyalty brought one a great read. Characters~ They all have reasons to be in the story, a strong connection towards the two main characters. Hunter is the close friend of the student how is curious about why the teacher is so caring from her and starts to worry. The teacher is faced with keeping his emotions hidden, these problems make for interesting plot lines and development of characters. Grammar~ Overall I didn't see many mistakes other then the ones your readers kindly corrected but I did come across the same mistake as I did in another review was the capital letter after a comma when in quotation marks. Example: The Old Man looked fondly at his son and replied, "It didn't have to happen." Where it is corrected to be: The Old Man looked fondly at his son and replied, "it didn't have to happen." Also all 'I's are meant to be capitalized, that is also the rule for words like I'll. A mistake or maybe typo I have seen a little in your story. Summary Review~ This is an excellent and interesting plot line story, with good quantity long updates for people who love to get in a lengthy read. ~Sorry it took so long but I'm glad to have read it.~
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