REVENGE

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Bro_emokid (01), Nov 3, 2012.

  1. Update home skillet!!!
     
  2. First on page 3!!!!! :3
     
  3. Update tate
     
  4. Home skillet? No comment. 
     
  5. Friday, June 20th, 2019
    When I wake up everything is blurred at first, then clear as I look around the bleach white room. I can see my friends and family all standing and sitting around the room. Willie is leaning against the window looking out at the rain falling, Jacob is sitting in one of the chairs, holding Josie as she sleeps in his arms, David is holding Jessica's hand waiting for something. Ash is sleeping in Justine's lap as she holds my hand and crys softly.

    I squeeze Justine's hand lightly as I wake and he looks up. The look on her face is shocked at first, probably that I'm awake so soon, the she gets up, sets Ash on the chair and wrapped her arms around me and cried into my chest.

    It's Willie who is first to speak, still looking out the window, "what happened out there a week ago?" At first I don't answer but then I feel everyone's eyes on me, so I decide to explain

    10 minutes later

    Once I finished explaining what happened out there, everyone just stared in aw at me.

    Jessica and Josie run over and hug me while Justine is still crying into my chest.

    Tyler walks in the room eating, as usual, "Wow bro your awake, want some food?" he asks
    "You bet I do I haven't eaten In like a week" I say
    Justine falls asleep In my arms and I walk out the hospital to our car sitting out front.
    "Tyler, Willie, Jacob, and David meet me at the safe house after taking your ladies home...we need to start planing how we will stop the terrorists and planing our REVENGE"
     
  6. Awesomeness!!!!
     
  7. I like it!!!!!
     
  8. I like the emphasis on 'revenge'. Really sets the story into motion.
     
  9. Yah i agree!
     
  10. Yes I said home skillet got a problem? Nice beast!!!

    BUMP

    UPDATE!!!
     
  11. First on page 4 what now!?
     
  12. Nope. 
     
  13. Rushing me to update already? I just updated
     
  14. I'm not rushing you. Sometimes great ideas take a while.
     
  15. Haha true dat...and the best ideas take the longest
     
  16. It's called writer's block.
     
  17. I know...I have had writers block on a lot of story's I've written and I hate it