Unbalanced

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoneDeleted, Oct 30, 2012.

  1. (P.S. This is the original Blood_Roze aka Rose. If you remember me Lights, even thought its been 3 or so months, then HI!!!!!
     
  2. Hey!!!! Roze! HiI! Yes, it's been a long time. But it will all explain during the story.
     
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    Moments passed by, and everything else seemed lost to the little girl. She hadn't seen the man so affectionate, but at least she wouldn't need to cry of loneliness, but it still wouldn't make much of a difference, her heart would be on the brink, and confused as ever.

    The girl let go of the man, and straightened her shoulders, for he was very strong,"Where are we?"

    "We probably should be in the encasing section, where they would wait for us to evaluate", with the straightest face the girl has ever seen.

    "Wait, encasing section? What is this?!?"

    "I guess your too young to know."he huddled his blanket closer.

    The little girl frowned at the thought. And to think he could help her! No, she couldn't. She wouldn't give into his little prank, obviously showing he wasn't meant to be trusted. She walked off, and shoved to the other corner, and sat there, for anything, a signal, to give her some idea that there was hope.

    >An office<

    A man carefully rested a pile of papers to the mahogany desk, that was crafted finely, to a woman that was covered in black lace that the only visible thing was her eyes, a crisp orange.

    "We have a new applicant."

    "Did you do by force?"the woman questioned, her voice clear.

    "She gave in, at sleep."the man coughed.

    "Then why bring someone do weak to it? It it obviously a waste of time" she scoffed, and checked through the papers, shuffling and reading.

    The man spoke,"For our next applicant, we have Gabby Charles, age 12, was currently living in the state of New York, and had recently been taken to the encasing section."

    The woman paused,"Strengths?"

    "Unknown."

    "Agility?"

    "Unknown."

    "Intelligence?"the woman said with rage.

    "Un.....known, miss."

    The woman slammed her fist to the desk.

    Both the girl and the woman had the same thought.


    WHAT AM I DOING?
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    Feedback please. 
     
  4. I'm eating this up. OMNOMNOMNOM!
     
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  6. I'll update soon.
     
  7. ._. Bump? I might update, but idk.
     
  8. Sky!!! This is incredible. I'm extremely intrigued. UPDATE PLEASE