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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by iDontLikePeople2, Aug 25, 2013.

  1. UPDATE PLS
     
  2. Sorry I haven't updated in a while guys, my Dad has been in hospital and I'm the only child who lives close enough to visit him.I'll try and update soon, though.
     
  3. Aww okay :cry: I hope your dad's okay
     
  4. Thanks, Sammi.
     
  5. Wow, this is amazing 
     
  6. Thank you, Cinna Chan.
     
  7. Update!

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    Chapter Three

    We leave tomorrow, but I can't sleep. Carl decided to stay with us tonight, but mainly to keep my company. He is awake, too. He won't fall asleep until I have. We lie there, side by side, facing each other, but not talking. Silence. I only hate silence when it's between me and Carl. I can't stand it. I should get up, move around. Maybe it will make me feel better.

    I unzip my sleeping bag, and walk outside. It feels nice to stretch my legs. I sit down, with my knees up to my chin, my arms wrapped around my legs. I sit there for a while, thinking about what my challenge could be. After a while, Carl emerges from the tent, and sits beside me. I rest my head on his shoulder.

    "Scared?" He asks me. Danny told Carl everything. About all of us, about our journey.

    I shake my head.

    He chuckles, then puts his arm around me. It feels nice. Just me and Carl. Doing nothing.

    "Claire," Carl begins. "This place you're going. Is it dangerous?"

    "Sort of," I reply.

    "OK," he takes a deep breath. "Be careful, alright? I don't want to lose you."

    At that last sentence, I turn and face him. His face is red, so I press my palm to his cheek. He puts his hand over mine. I drop my hand. Now it's getting strange. Like there is a space between us, and it's being filled. Carl is filling it.

    And I'm right, because now he'a coming closer to me. He takes my hand and pulls me so that I'm standing. He smiles. Suddenly, his lips are against mine. It does feel weird, but I don't pull away. I wrap my arms around his neck, and pull myself up. I'm too short. He lets go, then smiles at me.

    What do I do? Smile back?

    I return his smile.

    We stand there for a few minutes, arms wrapped around each other. His body is so warm, I can't let go.

    "Claire?" He says.

    "Yes?"

    "I love you,"

    "I..." I stammer. "Um..."

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    ?Yes, I know it's short. But yeah...

    Cliffhanger!

    Quiz Time!

    If this was turned into a film, who would you cast as Claire?
     
  8. Wow amazing
     
  9. Me myself and in
     
  10. 
    That's TOTALLY cute!
    Carl is being such a sweetheart 
     
  11. Can I be in ths story??
     
  12. @BlueSapphireRose

    Sure, you can be in the story! What is your name? And do you mind waiting a few updates to be in it?
     
  13. Yes I won't mind waiting and can my name be Bianca
     
  14. Any talent will do I can't choose
     
  15. @BlueSapphireRose

    Thank you, Bianca. I will try and fit you in somewhere. You may be in the next chapter, as this one is kind of full. Once again, thank you.
     
  16. In that case can I be in your story too? 
     
  17. @Cinna_Chan

    Of course! Just tell me your name and I'll squeeze you in.

    NOTE!

    If anybody would like to be in the story, please post your name below. Thank you.
     
  18. My RP name is Rosa, so can you let me in with Rosa? 
     
  19. @Cinna_Chan

    Sure, Rosa! Lovely name by the way. Again, you may have to be in Chapter Four, if not, Chapter Five. Believe me, you will love your character!
     
  20. ohemgee thats cute