Short story (kinda dumb dont judge)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *smiley234 (01), Mar 30, 2012.

  1. My mouth drops open at his name,because he was the guy who I was supposed to find, and he was supposed to help me "uh ... Umm.. Im Alice" I say stumbling with my words. "well Alice, I am sorry for coming off cruel if I did, to he honest you caught me off guard" he says running his hand through his hair. "I'm sorry, dimitri I am just out of sorts because I don't remember much. I was supposed to come and I find you" I blush as I realize he is still standing shirtless. He frowns at my response and goes to his closet to find a shirt as if he could read my thoughts. I sit on the couch putting my head in my hands, all of sudden so Hungary. "you will not hunt around here for your nourishment, I will not allow it" he says through clenched teeth
     
  2. please get my story viewed, if I get 5 or more comments/bumps I will update
     
  3. Oh look! 5 bumps!!^^
    PLEASE UPDATE!!!
     
  4. [Flash back]. 
    Dimitri prov

    I saw her laying helplessly, the life being slowly sucked out of her by the shadow. I had to help her even though she was one of them. I shake my head torn between what's right and what I was raised to do. What was right won out and I jumped on the shadow creature and wrestled it off of her. We rolled around on the ground, but he overwhelmed me with his shadow form. I began to think I was going to suffocate, but the woman on the ground began to give off a beautiful light even a glow that pushed away the shadow. I was awe struck with her glow that I began to be drawn to her. I saw her eyes flutter open and look at me for a brief moment. I picked her up and threw her over my shoulder walking to my apartment at the edge of town. Well not all the way you know their are always taxis.
     
  5. It is good I like it
     
  6. Help me decide what Alices "kind" is!