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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LilySnape (01), Jan 16, 2012.
-Opens her mouth to argue-
Ari -shifts to wolf form- "I'll meet y'all there."
Krys: No, just get on.
(Krys said that to Sam, not Ari )
-Obediently climbs onto Krys's back-
Krys: Hold on tight. *Starts running*
-Holds onto her fur-
Krys: *Races through the forest* Loosen your grip a little, you'll pull out my fur...
Ari -runs to the clan-
Sorry -Loosens her grip-
Krys: It's ok... *Reaches the camp*
Ari "Hello!"
Krys: Hey Ari. Sam, you can get off now...
Ari -Walks around, eyeing the pack-
Okay -Jump off and lands on the ground in panther form-
Ari -brushes up against the a male-
(a male*)
Krys: Ari, show Sam where she can rest. I'll check the pack for now.
-Walks forward-
(*Check the pack's training )