Broken

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by iSassBendAndSnapToBreakNoses, Jan 19, 2013.

  1. Ive been reading from the begining silently cant do it anymore love this so much:)
     
  2. Aww thank you  I'm going to try on update later today and then hopefully one tomorrow. So much to do 
     
  3. Update!
    Bump!
     
  4. Updating later tonight everyone  I'm so busy today 
     
  5. love it! That priss-illa really annoys me. Hopefully there will be a big fight scene with her! Muahaha! BUMP!!  btw, this is my alt :)
     
  6. Chapter 6

    I hear a knock on my stall and two black sneakers in facing me.

    "W-what do you want," I stutter still trying not to cry.

    "I want to say I told you so," the voice responded.

    I open up the stall and I see Noah standing in front of me, "What are you doing here? It's the girls' bathroom!"

    "And I care because?"

    "Okay. Look. You were right. I guess he just isn't the one for me," I sob.

    "You're going to be heartbroken a lot; it's only seventh grade ya know."

    "Gee. Thanks Noah. I really don't need this right now."

    "Geez. I'm sorry. Anyway, school's over. You outta go to your locker and get your stuff," he walks out.

    I sit in the stall thinking what had happened in the past two days and just shake my head. The door swings open and I see someone knocking on my stall.

    "Noah, can't you just leave me alone?"

    "Oh, trust me," the voice said hissing, "it's not Noah."

    I swing the door open and see Priscilla standing there with her hands on her hips, "Great, now you. Can I help you? I really don't want to be bothered."

    She smiles wickedly, "I just came to tell you, I told you so. My mother always handles things."

    "What did she do? Threaten Garrett or something?"

    "None of your business, freak," she last says before she walks out.

    I finally get out of the stall and head over to my locker where a huge crowd stands. The murmurs of something on it was catching their attention. I push my way through the crowd and almost puke all over the floor.

    There, on my locker, was a piece of paper... With the letter "C" on it... Written in... Well...















    Blood.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Things are about to get a little dirty . Who posted it on her locker? We'll see! 
     
  7. ……:O………………BUMP!!! :D
     
  8. 
    Bump!
     
  9. Great job lovin it even more every time!!!!!!
     

  10. These two commented and I friken thought it was an update
     
  11. Thanks for all your support everyone! . I'll be updating in about 2-2 1/2 hours . If you want updates on your wall, please tell me below so I know .

    Much love,

    Shannon 
     
  12. Bump  amazing update, Shannon 
     
  13. Uuupppdddaaaattttteeeee!
     
  14. Yay!! Bump bump-love it.
     
  15. Hey everyone! I probably won't update till late tomorrow. I'm having a major writers block . Hopefully I'll overcome it soon and continue updating 