___back_in_school_after_the_summer_holidays_______ The girls where now outside walking around "so go on then Ella tell us bout him. Weve only been back in school 2 weeks. So how do you no him for weeks for him To do that???!!!" Airria said "oh well um we meet as this party and um we got talking and um we had a summer fling. And he's so kind and funny and he's from England. We've been on dates to the cinema and bowling and we've been to a few more partys and weve had walks in the park and he took me out to a pizza café and when he said he was coming to this school we where so happy " Ella said smiling. "aaaaw that's so sweet; but you better make sure Sophie knows that he's yours before she takes him. You no what he was like with my boyfriend. Shane was my age , 15 but I made that joke about her and it spread around the school like a wild fire and when Sophie found out it was me who started it she started flirting with Shane and shortly after she got him to dump me and go out with Sophie but she dump Shane after a while." "look I think Sophie knows Jason's mine but she wants him!" Ella replied "omg he is do fit Ella. Well done you got yourself a fit British lad" Airria said "haha thanks Airria" Ella said "oh god here comes Sophie now!" Danielle said in shock "hey girls Iv decided something yeeeeey Ella if you dump Jason there will be no hurt feeling and we can just move on but if you don't then.... Well things are gonna get nasty" Jason ran over to them. "Hey Ella I decided I'll hang round with you. So I can get to no your friend. So Sophie I'll catch you later" Jason said Sophie walked off in a sulk "yer Jason that would be great" ella said Ella, Jason,danielle and Airria went and sat down on a bench. "so Jason since your dating our best friend tell us a bit about your self" danielle said "so um.." Jason clapped his hands together "I'm from England, London. I'm 17. Um Iv been dating Ella this summer holidays. What else you girls wanna no ?" he said "why did you move here to California ???" Airria said "oh a fresh start. I got kicked out a lot of schools for all sorts of reasons and I have family on my mums side so my mum thought it would be good if we moved to get a fresh start and my mum got offered a job at the bank." Jason said "Mmm thats kewl. So would you ever dump Ella for Sophie?" danielle asked "Danielle you can't asked that" Ella said "no ella it's ok .. No I love Ella and we've done to much for me just to throw away!" Jason said "so what have you done?" Airria asked. "0k I refuse to answer that haha. I'll answer anything about me. Promise. " Jason said "Jason so wheres your dad?" Danielle said "Danielle that's to personal" Ella said "no it's fine. Really. My dad died in Afghanistan last year. He was a army officer." Jason said more quietly "oh I'm sorry Jason I didn't no" danielle said "no it ok just don't tell the rest of the school. I don't want people feeling sorry for me!" Jason said "yes sure we won't say anything WILL WE" Airria said " yer our lips are shut" danielle said. "your not good enough For Ella but if you break her heart we will kill you. Mark our word!" Airria said "so me and Danielle need to go um..." Airria said The two girls stood up and walked away linking arms and giggling. "so um I like your friends" Jason said smiling. He ran his fingers through ella's hair. It was shiny soft and knot free. "Ella your amazing" Jason whispered "so are you" Ella said as she planted a short kiss on his lips "maybe tomorrow you can hang out with my friends?" Jason asked "but what about Sophie. You no she hates my gut!" Ella said "i know I know babes but Sophie is in a cheerleading competition tomorrow so it'll all be kewl" Jason said "ok then sure" Ella smiled at Jason "but they'll all be two years older then me. Do you think that'll be a problem" "of course not it'll all work out fine" Jason said "haha jason try saying.. Damn no. It'll all be kewl" Ella said "haha American slannng Damn no. It'll all be kewl" Jason said laughing . They carried on talking until the bell rang for them to get to there separate classes Jason walked Ella to her classroom and followed her in "Jason what are you doing?" Ella said A few of the 15 year olds where staring. They didn't know about them!!! Ella sat down at her seat. Jason bent down and kissed her. "Jason everyones staring" Ella said laughing "does it matter?" Jason said "hahaha I guess not" Ella said And they carried on kissing. Jason running his fingers through her hair. "hey man get yaw dirty lips n hands offer her noww" shouted someone
Good idea but seriously if you used proper grammer and spelling it could be so much better. All you need to do is make it more formal.
It's kewl I'll try n do all that stuff and hopefully it'll be alright then xxx but I think it's good that your saying how to improve it.
Aaaw thxz (my English teacher didn't say that. I use 2 spell things how they sounded and wif the accent n all it was difficult) lol