the boy next door

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LCL_Mrs-Mouse (01), Feb 2, 2012.

  1. Please don't bypass.
     
  2. I looked at him blushing.
    Now I knew for sure he was drunk.

    But I didn't care, but c
     
  3. But I didn't care i was high to.

    I was High on him.
    "you know sapphire,I've never felt rejection"

    "ya me neither"I lied I giggled.

    "I always thought I wouldn't but damn it hurts"

    I nodded kicking stones.

    "and I was hoping you wouldn't do that to me"

    "ya"I said smiling.

    "will you pretend to be my girlfriend"


    "WHAT"I said.

    "I like Tammy alot but she won't even look at me please sapphire"

    "I nodded my head"

    He was supposed to want me not her.

    Sorry for the short update, I've been at my grandmas for christmas
     
  4. Lol I said Christmas I meant, spring break
     
  5. Hmmm.... I thought it was weird when you said 'Christmas' haha
     
  6. Elijah pov.
    This was to easy, sapphire was completely melting in my hands.

    What now Shiloh, you took some one I liked now it's payback.

    She took everything to easy.
    It was kinda creepy outside.

    I leaned down whispering in her ear.
    "lets get outta here ya"

    She nodded her head sadly.
    What why was she sad.

    I was me, QB of the football team handsome me.

    I grabbed her hand slowly swinging it.
    Why wouldn't she talk this was to akward.

    "you know I got a scholarship"I bragged.

    "really that's so amazing"she said excitedly.

    Ya that's right finally.
    I didn't know why but it made me smile when she did.

    It was something about her.
    Maybe how she was like my little sister.

    "it was nothing"I said smiling.

    She stopped staring at me opened mouth.
    She shoved me giggling.
    "Elijah what do you mean nothing, it's amazing there are people like me who are completely talentless"

    "you are not talentless"I said.

    She looked at me sadly and shrugged.

    "I'm not smart or pretty not even funny"she said kicking a stone.

    "sapphire would I be with you if you weren't pretty, and maybe you aren't that smart if your here with a loser like me"I said laughing.

    She smiled her bright smile again.
    Oh god what a pretty smile she had.

    She sat down.

    "you don't know how lucky you are"she muttered.

    I sat down beside her.
    "I'm obviously really lucky to get you to pretend to be with me"I said chuckling.

    "no I'm serious Elijah, ey do you hear that"she said turning her head.

    I turned and saw, Shiloh walking around.

    I immediately turned to sapphire kissing her.

    I kissed her long and hard.
    The only problem was she wasn't kissing me back.

    "Elijah, wait Noo get off her"I heard adams voice.


    Oh sweet sweet victory.
     
  7. Just read it all, and I love it! Bump!!!!
     
  8. >.> This is poorly written.
     
  9. I am, I dont have hard core criticizing skills.
     
  10. Sapphires P.O.V.
    I felt my Brain go into a happy frenzy.
    But my heart felt almost dead.
    It felt awkward and sad.

    I looked at him my eyes open wide.
    I didn't know exactly what to say.

    He smiled triumphantly,but I only had enough heart to smile meekly back.

    It took me a while to realize he wasn't smiling at me.
    But it Only took me a second to realize someone was charging toward us yelling.

    I looked up into Shiloh's beautiful eyes but they only looked down at me in hate and anger.

    I looked away letting out a yelp of surprise.
    I saw Elijah shake up defiantly and strong but I stood up cowardly.

    There in the light they looked like male models.

    But I knew they were only Elijah and Shiloh.

    He looked at me hurt and mad but I didn't see why.

    "what the he'll was that"he shouted at Elijah his voice cracking.

    He turned and faced me.
    I was ready to cry and ask for him to be sorry.
    "and you wow that's all I can say"he shouted.

    But that comment pushed me and I realized.
    What was there to be sorry to.

    Why would I be sad, why scared.

    I stood taller and faced him.

    "what, haw tell me honestly what's your problem"I shouted shoving him.

    He looked to shocked to respond, but he shook it off.

    "what's my problem it's obvious acting like a little slut, I knew girls kissed him when he snapped his fingers but I never thought you were one of 'em"he shouted stepping almost on me, pushing me back.

    "a slut, did you just...... No you piece of complete GARBAGE"I howled.

    "garbage, at least I don't run around hoping I'll get noticed, you little attention hog"he scowled at me.

    "I don't hope for attention and if I did I already got it me and him are going out"I yelled back.

    I felt Elijah grab my waist, he pulled me back into his arms.

    He turned me as we walked away from Shiloh.
    His face complete in shock and hurt.

    I knew he was in pain and no matter how made I was at him I would give the world to take his pain away.
     
  11. What happened to Brad!?!? I love your story though I just started today
     
  12. Don't worry bradshaw coming back