the boy next door

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *LCL_Mrs-Mouse (01), Feb 2, 2012.

  1. UPDATE OR WE'L NEVER READ THIS AGAIN!!
     
  2. I agree with Justin
     
  3. Update?
     
  4. Bump i demand an update
     
  5. BUMP. UPDATE.
     
  6. BUMP I THOUGHT THERES AN UPDATE...
    IF THERE IS THEN WHERE IS IT?
     
  7. BUMP!BUMP!! UPDATE!!! 
     
  8. Stop bumping this thread she isn't gonna update
     
  9. I awoke to someone violently shaking me.
    I looked up at a young girl staring at me worriedly.
    She had big brown eyes, and brown hair.
    She smiled as she saw me open my eyes.
    She couldn't be any younger than 7.
    I sat up my back aching.
    Note to self: no more sleeping on floor.
    "she's awake she's awake!!"squealed the little girl.
    I heard muttering, then someone kneeled beside me.
    "umm.........hey" I said silently as I glanced at the person beside me.
    He was around my age,and maybe a bit older.
    He had a young face that looked mischievous.
    But still it looked like it was maturing.
    He was handsome over all.
    With amazingly beautiful big brown eyes like his sister.
    I stared at the peircing in his lip.
    It really complemented him.
    He smiled at dazzlingly beautiful smile at me.
    He dressed kinda funny with these skinny jeans.
    And his shirt cracked me up.
    It had the picture of a eye.
    Then a picture of a .
    Then a picture of a .

    "hey are you okay ,saddie saw you and thought you were dead"he said awkwardly.
    His smile slowly fading away.

    Was I ugly or something,why ask I knew I was.
    Like I said before I was no beauty queen.

    "ya I'm fine"I said standing up.

    "you sure you don't usually see people randomly asleep"

    "here you do"

    "guess I wouldn't know grew up in california"

    "oh so your a city boy I see"

    "ya and I can tell by your accent you a country girl"

    "that I am,full bred"

    "well country girl what do yall do for fun around here"

    "why don't I just show ya"I said mischievously I grabbed his hand and scurried off to the one place I loved the most.
    The one place were I actually felt......beautiful.
     
  10. Sorry guys highschool Is murdering me!!social life and sports plus good grades isnt easily done
     
  11. THE WAREHOUSE?!?!
    The warehouse was abandoned and old now.
    But every Friday there was a huge party at it.
    And if one thing was clear was I loved to dance.
    I scuffed in my boots,shaking with a anticipation.
    We had to drop his sister off and we were off.
    He looked around it being empty.

    "yoo this place is completely empty"he bellowed listening to the Eco.

    "they'll be coming to set it up soon"I said sitting down.

    I loved the way he talked.
    Almost as much as I loved the way country boys talked!!
    I slid my hand up and down the sand.
    I knew I was gonna be dancing soon.
    But still I was eager to jump up and bust a move.
    "you know I love this place,more than almost anything"I said.
    He smiled,and looked around playing with his lip piercing.

    "so what do we do here,play the banjo or something"

    That joke strung me wrong.
    It really hurt me,I looked at him anger peaking in me.
    "Noo we ain't no hillbillies,alright we civilized we ain't no rednecks either"I stated standing up crossing my arms.

    "alright,alright calm down sweet cheeks"

    I felt myself blush"sorry,just I hate those jokes and assumptions"
    OMG he just called me sweet cheeks!!
    My body rang happily, I felt like soaring high.

    "well I won't make em anymore but for reals what do they do here"he said his voice made me jump and smile.

    It sounded so rebellious yet so young and innocent.

    "well we just sing and dance and have a party,even when were not having a party I come here to dance and just lose myself"i said my accent nice and thick.

    "you know,I wish I had a spot like this"

    "well how bout we share,city Casanova"

    "Id like that ya know I've been talking to you,and haven't even gotten your name"

    "we'll my name is Denise just call my sapphire"

    "my names(enter name here)"

    "your so different from country boys"

    "really and how so?"

    "well first of all, your confident and zangy,I guess I mean country boys are confident and all your just different"

    "your different to you Your easy to talk to, your pretty and yet not self absorbed"

    "that's where ya wrong I am NOT pretty never have been"

    "you wanna bet your wrong"he said getting closer to me.
    he leaned in his lips dangerously close.

    "just tell me to stop"he whispered.
    My heart raced crazily, his lips pressed against mine gently.
    I felt his piercing, his tongue slowly slipping in.

    "sapphire I knew I'd find you her girl you had me ready to......... Sapphire who's this?!!?!?" yelled a angry voice.

    Oh $hit I had forgotten about him.