The Boy Next Door

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Tiffeh_love (01), Jun 15, 2012.

  1. Lol this is great, I just finished writing a story with the same title but completely different 
     
  2. lol it's awezombeh (sorry I'm a guy I need zombies ) even I liked your story 
     
  3. You need to…
    U really should update.
    Please update!
    Don't make me kill this bear!
    Are you seriously doing this to me?
    This is prohibited! You must update!
    Elephants will now run on your mailbox!
     
  4. This is really good so far bump!
     
  5. I'll give u some if you want me to Tiff...The story is awesome
     
  6. Cherr i just realused that soelled UPDATE 
     
  7. Seriously? Just now!
     
  8. Yup 
     
  9. Anthony duhmbo
     
  10. Well that's better than being the one who loses all the people she loves
     
  11. did you lose all the people you love?
     
  12. It's funny, there is story titled the same, with the same plot...
     
  13. It's complicated
     
  14. Wow I put next week I meant tommorow abt to update guys
     
  15. A SPECIAL THANKS TO CHERRY131 RITTA AND ADAMGONTIER<- I think I spelt it wrong so sorry|••••••••••••••••••
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    Tiffany's Pov
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    We finished our classes Except for science this is my favorite class because its the only class Jonathan and I have together. I enter science trying to be as casual as possible, he happens to sit behind me. As I'm walking in these jocks are throwing a foot ball to each other blocking the doorway, I say " excuse me" one looks but ignores me. I push my way through them but my foot trips on the bottom of a desk I go flying onto someone lap. I hope it's not....please don't be...I look at the person slowly and it him! Jonathan is a bit startled but has his arm around me " you okay there? " he asks me " y-y-yea" I say mesmerized by his beauty. "haha you better get back to your sit before our witch of a teacher comes back.when I'm starting to get up, he pulls me back and kisses my cheek softly. "W-w-what was that for?" I ask, he
    Smiles and says " because your adorable"
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    Jonathan's Pov
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    I smile and say " because your adorable", did I seriously just say that to her she's probably like um... Okay but instead she blushes like crazy, smiles,and walks back to her seat.
    Class begins
    Mr.Dabney: Students grab a partner we are going into the lab.
    All the girls run to my desk say " Jonathan pick me, pick me!", all the guys scoff.
     
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    I ignore them and walk straight to tiffany "will you be my...............









    Lab partner
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    LOL DID IFOOL YOU OR WE'RE U LIKE IS SHE
    SERIOUSLY LMFAOOO FEED BACK APRECIATED will update later tonite!!!
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  17. LOOL I LIKE THIS THIS IS VERY GOOD PLEASE UPDATE AND IF YOU CAN WALL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE PLEASE
     
  18. Jonathan's pov
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    "Sure" she says acting as if she could care less. We Finish the stupid project and my teacher comes around she gives us an A . damn this girl is smart and kinda sexy when she's focused, I look at her, her hairs in a bun. She wearing a blue tank top and black shorts that go up to her knees . Such a tomboy but I love it! Her head is slanted and her soft pink lips are so cute. This girl got it going on, but sadly she would probably never go for a guy like me, wait am I falling for her.... Pssshh no..... Well maybe.
    School ends

    I'm in the school library she comes in and says " hey Jonathan" " hi" I say
    All the seats are taken and she looks around then at my lap. She blushes and says "oh guess I have to go, no seats...." I smirk at her and say there's one left. She goes " oh really where!" looking around excitedly.
    I pull her waist onto my lap and she blushes. "right here" I say smiling
    " I'm too heavy I should get off" (she's like the thinnest thing ever but she still has curves and junk in the trunk if ya know what I mean. "no your not are you crazy you really light and beautiful", oops I wasnt supposed to say that it just came out. "what was that last thing you said sir?" she says mockingly
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    ENJOY I DID IT EARLIER FOR MY BESTIES 