I'm gonna stop the story I just can't continue writing my puppy was my inspiration until my ex killed him
I did my first story, it's not hard. You just gotta write right, not like this. Also, if you can't take criticism, don't post. Simple. Next time proofread, check your spelling and grammar, and make sure it flows. This doesn't flow at all. Which makes it, to an extent, suckish. Listen to criticism if you wanna be a better writer.