Jakes POV __________________________________ As we walk out of class I look for Ali...I can't seem to find her so I go to her locker and wait for her. When she gets there she doesn't notice me so I wrap my arms around her waist and whisper into her ear "Be mine?" She's smiles and turns around facing me. "I wish I could but sadly Tristan I'm dating him...." I look away "It's okay I'll see you later" I give her a slight smile an kiss her forehead and with that I carried on with the rest of my day.... __________________________________ EVERYONES POV We go to our 2,3,4,5,and 6th period classes by the time there all over we're exhausted and ofcorse on the first day they had to give us homework! Ughhh these teachers are stupid! When the last bell rings we all go to our locker and get our stuff to leave. __________________________________ Ali's POV I heard the last bell ring and I waited for Tristan by my locker.....but he never came so I texted Jake To: Jake Hey Jake...it's Ali I'll be at your car in 15 minutes From: Ali I wait a few minutes and decide to go looking for Tristan. (Sorry Tristan for this but it has to work out some way lol) I got to the end of the hallway and turned the corner to see Tristan kissing another girl I was so upset. Tears filled my eyes and soon enough they were running down my face. "TRISTAN HOW COULD YOU YOUR A JERK DON'T EVER TALK TO ME AGAIN!!! I HATE YOU!!!!" I say with so much of my voice breaking. I run down the hall and look for Jake. I wanted him to hold me in his arms and tell me that everything would be okay. I ran out the front door and there Jake was. He opened his arms as though he knew something was wrong. I ran and collapsed in his arms, hiding my face in his chest as my mascara along with my tears ran down my face. He held me for what seemed like hours and didn't let go until I stopped crying. I looked up at him and said........"Yes Jake I will be yours" He leaned down and kissed my forehead. I didn't let go but soon he said "Love I know we could stay like this for forever but we have to get home" I nodded and took his hand in mine and smiled as we walked to his car. Did you like? Did you expect this? Feedback please it took me forever to write this lol thanks for the support
Jakes POV __________________________________ I finally got her! As we walk to my car hand in hand I smile. When we get to the car I open the door "Mi lady" she smiles. "thank you" she says and I say "your welcome love" I walk to my side of the car and get in and drive us both back to my house. Sorry ik it's short just trying to leave a cliff hanger lol
Hey, just a bit of criticism, but could you separate your work into paragraphs? It'll really help with reading
OMG JUST READ IT, crap on u tristie lol we still love u, and mar CLIFF HANGER grrrrr I hate those!!!! Lol