FAN FIC NEWS ( RETURNS! )

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HEXIN, Feb 22, 2012.

  1. Still testing...

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    ( why I'm testing? So If I can see if y'all can read it! )
     
  2. Lol.

    HEXIN MAH BROTHER FROM ANOTHER MOTHER! 
     
  3. I can read it 
     
  4. Good to know MommaPie! 

    JESS!!! YOUR RP'S ARE LOCKED!
     
  5. I can read it
     
  6. Ok... Loads of improvements have now been made in FFN! 
     
  7. Bad news for that picture screenshot thingy I was going to do AND the new pic section of the News, because PhotoBucket keeps on crashing.
     
  8. When are you going to update this?!
     
  9. FFN is on Friday ( weekly )

    I've also solved the crashing problem. 
     
  10. Ok...wait, today is friday...yay
     
  11. I have a suggestion for you!  Just for thought though. Maybe it would be nice to have a small review of a few stories every day? Or maybe you could have more people do the fan fiction news so that there is a little something everyday? By the way, I love this!
     
  12. ITS FRIDAY! Yay...I'll be waiting for the update!
     
  13. It's Saturday for me XD but BUMP!!
     
  14. Oh God! I totally forgot!  but here it is!
     
  15. FAN FIC NEWS

    Hello audience, The FFN crew hoped that you enjoyed the Easter Holidays! Let's start with the usual things.. Here we will show you reviews of the best fan fiction stories and the most popular roleplaying threads. Every FFN will be supported with the MOST ENTERTAINING ads. Brought to you by HEXIN, TheAndi and LilySnape

    ( also, a few stories couldn't be here because my co-writers were inactive for the week! ~HEXIN )

    Reviewed by HEXIN

    My Better Half

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    The FlashBack

    Two twins called Laura and Veronica were going to enter the car with their mother and father. Today, Veronica was in a bad mood in overall. The bad thing that Laura thinks is bad is that they know what they're going to say! For example, in the story - " Laura! " said Veronica, " I know you want to ride in the front. " Laura said.

    As the twin's mother comes into scene, she forces Veronica to sit with her at the back, leaving Laura in the front. They all came into the car, their dad turning on the radio, then focused on driving. Laura reached the knob of the radio so she can switch the station. But Veronica stopped her. They then, went into an argument and of course, Laura wins! YAY Veronica mumbled something to her and it was an insult.

    The dad was furious at the attitude of Veronica and he turned to her to say " STOP IT! " but just then, they collided with another car. That Laura was the only one to see....

    Author - MommaPie

    Rate - 9.7

    Comment - I really like twin stories! And the way you put the story, it deserved the rating I gave it!

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    Reviewed by TheAndi

    If and Then

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    Meredith wakes up and find a very handsome man in her bed. She freaks out and tell him to leave because it's her first day. He just smiles and and introduces himself. Meredith is confused but introduces herself too. And then he leaves and she gets ready for work. It was going to be a great day...or so she thought.

    Rate - 9.2

    Author - _RainbowDash_

    Comment: I don't watch Grey's Anatomy but I'll do my best! First, there's only one update so UPDATE MORE!  Second, critique I can give is to add spaces (paragraphs) before conversations because it's easier to read. Also, details. Otherwise, it

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    Reviewed by TheAndi

    Another Love

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    This story revolves around Karina and Brennan. It starts when Brennan finally gathers up enough courage to ask Karina out. So they went to the movies. And in the cinema, Karina spots her ex-boyfriend, Brian. Brian use to beat her up while they were together. After the movie, Brian confronts Karina and Karina eventually gives him a second chance. But she likes Brennan and they became a couple.

    Author - Aziza2

    Rate: 9.2

    Comment: I think the story is leading to be very interesting, but critique I can give is that there should be more description and more emotion building up to an certain vital scene. But other than that, it is a very good story.

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    Reviewed by HEXIN

    Life...Again

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    Like I said a few FFN's before, I REALLY love different category stories! This particular story is about a person who can reincarnate himself/herself again and again. In one of the reincarnation, she/he is a 7 year old girl named Gretchen. She had a friend called Macy, who didn't believe her about the reincarnation stuff. 10 years later she dies, and get reincarnated again as Katie... The following information has been cancelled due to being too awesome to be more exposed.

    Rate - 9.4

    Author - lindsey1414

    Comment - only a few grammatical mistakes in the updates, but other than that brilliant story! Unfortunately guys, she has Writer's Block and needs new ideas! Go to her thread and give her some ideas. 

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    Reviewed by TheAndi

    Our Kind of Relationship

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    Arianna is a student in Mr. Adam Klein's class. The thing is, (drumroll please) THEY'RE MARRIED! Both of them have decided to get married when Mr. Klein 'adopted' Arianna and her sister. But if course, they have lots and lots of problems. Like...is Arianna pregnant? With SOMEONE ELSE'S KID?!

    Rate: 9.6

    Author - -Hearts-Katie-

    Comment: I really really like this story. Incest.  But it is a very nicely written story. Wow, just, wow. 

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    Reviewed by TheAndi

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    If and Then

    Meredith wakes up and find a very handsome man in her bed. She freaks out and tell him to leave because it's her first day. He just smiles and and introduces himself. Meredith is confused but introduces herself too.

    And then he leaves and she gets ready for work. It was going to be a great day...or so she thought.

    Rate: 9.2

    Comment: I don't watch Grey's Anatomy but I'll do my best! First, there's only one update so UPDATE MORE!  Second, critique I can give is to add spaces (paragraphs) before conversations because it's easier to read. Also, details. Otherwise, it is great!

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    Chinese Guy

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    GROW SOME BALLS!

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  16. Whoops! if and then were posted twice! Skip the first one and read the second attempt!
     
  17. xD Hehehe. I'm on a story addiction to write.
    Anyway, Lily? I wonder where she is..
     
  18. Yeah, she hasn't been active for a week I think!
     
  19. .-. where the hell is she, Seth? xDDDD
     
  20. Lol yeah!!

    I'll take that idea on board goddess! 