Fan Fiction Reviews!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FallenAngel12321, Aug 25, 2013.

  1.  Hey Sammi. Ever need a right hand man.  I'm your chick. 

    Or should I stand right hand chick.
     
  2. OMG INCASE DESERVES 10 not 9.1 
     
  3. Rhy. I need to leave some space in case (HAHAHHAHA) Eli writes a better story. I'm not really rating anything a 9.5 or above just in case J. K. Rowling herself comes on here and writes a book :0 or someone as good as that.

    And I need permission to do Dear Diary. It'll be frozen right now.

    And okay I'll do the destinies.
     
  4. Woman, do you remember The Forbidden Kind? 
     
  5. Sigh.

    I'll probably rewrite The Last Kiss, and The Forbidden Kind.

     
  6. YAYYYYYYYYYY??
     
  7. Fan Fiction Reviews: Blood Edition!

    These reviews may be a tad bit biased to my favor for MURDER! >:D One of the factors that decide the rating is an interesting plot, and I think murder is reeeeeeaaaaaallyyyyyy interesting.

    Bloody Mary

    By: -KittyInBunnyland-

    Genre: Romance, suspense, thriller, realistic fiction

    Summary: Mary "Bloody Mary" Levine is a loner. Everyone close to her was killed, and she doesn't even know who's behind the murders. Now Mary is afraid to befriend anyone.

    Then she meets Michael Archibald. He's kind, friendly, helpful, everything she wants in a boyfriend.

    …But what if he gets killed too?

    Rating: 9.9

    Thoughts: This is just- I can't- I don't- what even- gah. The description, the action, the plot, the way she modernized the story of Bloody Mary, it's just mind blowing. Kudos to you, Eli.

    Advice: There was some repetition. (Sometimes a bunch of sentences in a row started with 'I'.)  Also a few grammar mistakes.

    Additional Information: ***FINISHED*** (There will be a sequel).

    Click here to go to Bloody Mary!

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    Karma Side Stories

    By: _Fyre-Heartz_

    Genre: Suspense, thriller, realistic fiction

    Summary: Nicole "Silence" Youngblood is a child who has recently killed her kindergarten class, along with her teacher. While on the run, another girl, Virtue, confronts her and offers her a place to stay in exchange for Silence to be an assassin.

    She's still doing the same job nine years later. Killing people without a trace of evidence. But then she meets a cop who takes the blame for her crimes -- and he doesn't even know her.

    Silence doesn't know who he is, but she's determined to find out…

    Rating: 9.9

    Thoughts: I LOVE THIS. I love the girl, who's like a genius even though she's a little kid. I love the detail. I love the action. I love the murder scenes. This. Is. Amazing.?

    Advice: There are some typos, and dialogue should be like this:
    "I have a face," she said.

    Most of the dialogue was like this:
    "I have a face," She said.

    I'm pretty sure that's not the correct way but I dunno.

    Additional Information: This is a prequel to Karma.

    Click here to go to Karma Side Stories!

    Click here to go to Karma!

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    Goodbye Cruel World

    By: Tash777

    Genre: Romance, depression, suspense

    Summary: Dan is in love with his best -- and only -- friend Rebecca. Too bad she's dating Alex, a guy who sees her as the equivalent to a piece of shit.

    Rebecca is the reason Dan stays alive. His parents treat him like a servant, and no one else likes him. He suffers from a severe depression and cuts often.

    Rating: 9.9

    Thoughts: Tashy likes making other writers look bad. She makes her stories amazing, chockfull of emotion and feelings and sadness, and we're just like, "come on! Save some talent for the rest of us!" This story killed me.

    Advice: Some of the letters that should have been capitalized weren't. And the writing style was a little odd when it was like, "if you'd listened to it you would have been deaf" and other stuff in the second person. That's how I feel about all stuff that have some "you's" in it, though.

    Additional Information: ***FINISHED***

    Click here to go to Goodbye Cruel World!

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    Waiting List

    • The Destinies Intertwine For You
    • Under the Covers Rewrite (frozen)
    • Price of Freedom
    • Cruel and Unusual

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    Poll Time!

    Answer for previous:

    Now we're going the other way, and you have to pick your most hated.

    • Justin Bieber
    • One Direction
    • Miley Cyrus
    • Rebecca Black

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    Last Thoughts…

    Guys I couldn't decide which was better out of those three because they're all just amazing in their own way. MURDER.

    Yes, this is a very short 'Last Thoughts' section. It's because I'm kinda dumb right now and I don't have any thoughts in my minuscule brain.
     
  8. What the fuck happened to my title? D:
     
  9. Thank youuuu 

    It's a tie between JB and 1D 
     
  10. All of them.
     
  11. I dislike all of them
     
  12. Haha. Yay! Thanks, Angela (TFK). 

    And... For the poll... Hmmmm... I'd say Miley Cyrus since I love her, except for her current fashion style and her mannerisms, but then there's One Direction and their sexiness, but they're too pop for my taste... Sure there's Justin Beiber, but I don't like him... And Rebecca black seems fine as a person... But not as a singer.

    Well... I'd say no one. 
     
  13.  OH MOST HATED?!

    I thought LOVE.


    damn, I should read the poll properly next time.


    WHAAAALE, I HATE ALL OF THEM EXCEPT FOR MILEY AND 1D (oi, they have amazing songs in their album that's not all poppy and shit. It's stupid why it's not even popular. ,_,)
     
  14. ANGEEEEL, REVIEW TILL THE DEATH OF ME 
     
  15. Okay Eli.

    I actually don't mind 1D because they actually have some pretty good songs… but those get way overplayed.

    I don't know who to choose. Y'all have to choose one though. 
     
  16. Jb, jb, annnd hmm who to pick ohhh I got it!!!


    Jb
     
  17. The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams. that's the quote of the day tune in tomorrow for more quotes
     
  18. -eats tuna fish-

    Idek

    That was a beautiful quote MWMN

    Man With Many Names

    I can't keep track anymore
     
  19. Just call me Alex 