Not to be mean just constructive critisizem make it more realistic and work on your grammar. There isn't somone dumb enuf to hit a lion with a stick. And the name jungle of death? Horrible name. If you crash-land you don't know where you are. Someone won't happen to bring along a torch either. Is there cell phone reception? If there is they can call for help.
It's not a stick didn't you read it clearly it's a weapon(old weapon) We bring torchs and knifes because we were going to a more likely Jungle place to camp,and it's a private plane.I used my bloody heart and time to write this thanks for you insult and your mean comment ,if you ever comment here again you will regret. Thanks Eagle.
Old weapon also as caveman time weapon. You should see what month did I wrote the story,May.Now it's Dec. If we have a phone and we called what is the stupid story about,it will go like this: Our plane crashed on an island. "Does anyone have a phone?Do you have a reception here?" "Oh I have a phone!there is reception!" -open phones and call- Few days later we all were save. THE END Does anyone want to read that story it's just like how many seconds done writing and reading.Better than I don't even need to write this story.Just saying.
After the stupid insult I still will continue my so call STUPID story ^_^ """""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" So they all went to the kitchen. "Omg!There....there is a rat!"Nikki shouted. "it's just a rat,you don't need to be scared"Jasmine said. "They....they are so.....grey...."Nikki thought. "Wow the kitchen has a lot pile of food I see "Qin said. "I saw a shiny stuff stuck in those food >.<"I said. "Oh no,I'm nit gonna touch that!"Qin said. "I will,there is no choice"Isaac said. Isaac bravely put his pair of hands in the disgusting rotten food.He push the food from up to down,left to right,finally a sharp razor wtf?chainsaw?That's awarkd,ok so he took the chainsaw and went down the basement,everyone followed Isaac. "I'm here!"Isaac shouted. "Thank god it's Isaac!"Moo said. So Isaac began to chop down the door with the dangerous chainsaw.It was so sharp,so dangerous,if the chainsaw touches us I think we will be dead meat.Luckily the door wasn't so thick it was easy to chop open. "FRESH AIR!"Chris shouted. So three of them came out for the dark basement. "Thanks you,Isaac!"they three said. "You're welcome!"Isaac said. "Who's your new friend back there?"Jasmine asked. "Friend?Where?Oh o..."Zuess said.
"Let's go up stair everyone!"Moo said. "Hmmmm ok...." So they all quickly ran upstairs. "Who is he?!"Nikki asked. "He is that guy who said those spooky stuff >.<"Chris said. "Um...?"Qin said. "Ok,let's not thing about that anymore,we gotta sleep,the beds are awesome anyway"I said. Everyone fly upstairs and went to their bedrooms.Me and Qin sleep together(we are besties duh ;P),Nikki and Jasmine,Danzo ,Thizzle and Isaac,Chris,Moo and Zuess. When it was Midnight,the wind blew strongly,the curtain were fly up and down,the trees are waving from left to right,the owl was sitting on the window side.The hall light were going on and off.It was so cold that night,I was shaking my whole body,I hide myself in the blanket.Soon I slept in that scary night.
"Ok,let's go before we lose more time"Danzo said. Walking through the wide hallway.We saw a statue.It face was very familiar. "Why does this statue has a familiar face with someone?..."Moo said. "it looks just like....like.....ZOEY!"Isaac said. "Who called me?"I asked. When I saw the statue,I was thinking:Creepy>.< ".....Let's go!"I quickly say. "This is creepy..."Qin said. So we all walk through the big door soon.We continued our journey to the other side of the island.Walking by the ocean blue sea,listening to the wave splashing,all my tiredness are all gone,just peace in my mind,nothing more.