The Mystery Adventure

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -MsChocoLatte-, May 21, 2011.

  1. xD it's good
     
  2. Thanks Thizzle making part 5 now 
     
  3. :0 Hahahaha the got hit by a lion
     
  4. JJ panicky hits the lion's body,finally the lion is dead.

    "We shall eat the meat of the lion's, it's very rare to find a fierce and giant size lion to eat.It's sure tasty"said JJ

    "Really?"ask Nikki

    "really."said JJ

    "But its more tasty when you grill it with fire"said Nikki

    "What is fire?"ask JJ

    "Fire can cook thing from raw to cooked,and it will taste better than raw."said Nikki

    So we prepared a bunch of wood and rocks.The expert of making fire----Dan,makes a fire in just 2minutes.Thizzle takes his razor sharp knife and cut the lion's meat into thin pieces like sashimi.After that,JJ ties the meat onto a stick and grilled it on the flaming fire.It is cooked ready.Everyone eats the meat till zero in just a minute.I sit behind the tree,thinking of my 2 long lost brother----Chris and Lil and my dearest father Zuess. Qin sits beside of me asking if there's any problem.
     
  5. Thanks eagle
     
  6. We be making fire!!!!
     
  7. I suddenly cry,missing my long lost brothers and dearest father.Qin keeps asking why did I cry.Finally I say the whole thing out.

    "I'm miss my long lost brothers and my dearest father"i said.

    Qin also feel sad for me.

    "We will surely find your long lost brothers and father"said Qin bravely.

    "Will you help me keep this secret and not letting the others know?"I said

    "Surely I'll keep your secret,I swear."Qin said

    We hold thigh our hands and walk back to everyone.Everyone was talking happily.I appear to found something moving on the ground next to thizzle.It's moves slow,I give a signal to thizzle and he started standing up and walking away.I'll gave everyone a signal to take your weapons and get ready.A poisonous cobra jump out from the ground almost bite thizzle and JJ first whack the snake to the ground,Dan use his weapon and cut the snake head.The snake struggle furiously but it's too late,it has leave the world.

    "This place isn't safe anymore,we must quickly go!"said JJ

    " Oui Madame!let's move"said everyone.
     
  8. I didn't know what fire was :3 bahahah
    nice one zoey! :)
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    keep updating Hun :)
     
  9. Haha I like it Zoey :D keep it up
     
  10. Bump...







    Again
     
  11. I want in! I want them to find me in the forest... And I am strong and tuff
     
  12. As we walk,we saw a giant spider web.

    "it's adventure time!"Dan said.

    *everyone stares at Dan*Dan also felt abashed*

    "Ok,ok.But I still wanna hunt and keep the spider legs as a souvenir"Dan said.

    A giant poisonous spider suddenly appear at the back of Dan,everyone changes their direction and stares at the spider.

    JJ ask Dan to run,"theres a giant spider behind u" without making a sound.Dan walks slowly step by step,the spider also move step by step slowly dan.When Dan started running the spider quickly spilt the web on him.The spider pulls Dan to his giant web and wanted to eat he's meat till bones.Everyone felt abominate.The spider slowly crawls to Dan,Dan kept looking at the spider's disgusting mouth.The spider almost ate dan,but thizzle saves his life now.Thizzle can't stand the disgust so he took up his spear and cut the spider's stomach.The spider's blood soon spilt out at Dan and Thizzle.

    "OMG!!"Dan said.

    "This is your worst adventure,but it's mine best."Thizzle said.*laugh cruelly*

    "lol,u better wipe your body before continuing the adventure."I said

    "Fine,then we can go."Thizzle and Dan said.
     
  13. Gross?!?!
     
  14. Hehehe... XD
     
  15. Haha more!!!!!!!!!!
     
  16. Nice story