Escape

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Elysie, Jul 17, 2012.

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    Tiffany's POV

    "EVERYBODY WHO WISHES TO LIVE FOLLOW ME!" I looked up at him, starting to head back towards the passengers. Finally, someone had enough sense to take action.

    As I fell in line with the other passengers, I noticed a shady looking man studying everyone closely. How odd. I was going to have to keep my eye on him…

    Warily glancing at him from the corner of my eye, I started to move up in the shabbily formed line. "Where are we going?" One woman asked, pulling her dark hair into a ponytail.

    "I don't know. By the looks of it, we're probably blindly stumbling around the island. Pretty soon, someone's going to get attacked by a wild animal," another woman grumbled back. "If we get out of here alive, I want a refund."

    Trying to tune out their chattering, I strode to the front of the line. Now I had a better view of where we were going. Towards a whole lot of nothing.

    Pausing to knot my florescent green shoelace, I noticed the mysterious man slip a knife from his pocket. It was a simple gesture, probably a resource from the plane, but something about him made that move look sinister, even threatening.

    Shuddering, I moved up again. I wanted nothing to do with him.

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  2. Nicely done I'll be waiting for the next update 
     
  3. You AMAZING people you. 
     
  4. Pm me when it's my turn
     
  5. Angela.... It's my turn
     
  6. Cynthia's POV

    I looked back, I watched as a man shot up in the air then yelled at people to follow him. Well, at least someone has a sense of leadership. But, i'm not following someone who probably has no survival skill.

    I took out my hunting knife from my shoe and flipped it open. I gently touched the blade and smiled. It was still sharp. I kept walking and saw the first food source. Coconuts. I smiled, I knew how to break them open too.

    I started to formulate a plan in my head. Shelter, food and water were my first concerns. I checked off food and sighed. I could get rainwater but it could be days till it rained. I needed an alternate solution.

    I looked around and decided to go into the thin, jungle like area. I looked around and nodded. Maybe I could use some palm tree leaves to help build shelter.

    I heard a twig snapped behind me. I quickly turned and saw nothing was there. I narrowed my eyes. I suddenly had a bad feeling about this place.
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  7.  Oops… now it's Elysie's turn!
     
  8. This is lovely, girls! Unfortunately, I won't be updating today. I haven't sleep in the last 38 hours. 
     
  9. Flubb. I already commented on yours, sir. Calm yoself :|
     
  10. Elysie, you really need to update!!!!
     
  11. Sorry... I am really sick. If you want you can go without me
     
  12. Aww poor Elysie:( Are you okay?