Escape

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Elysie, Jul 17, 2012.

  1. Bump!!
    It's awesome
     
  2. People like this story way more than the other one. :|
     
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    My mom is still crying.

    She was never of one those people who liked scary rides.
    I wonder if that's the reason why? Why mom and dad were always fighting? I never thought my mom was brave. She always let my dad just yell at her. She would sit there, and dad would stand over and yell. I was supposed to be sleeping, but they were always too loud. But I learned a lot of words from them, but mom would get really sad if I repeated them. My dad just laughed.

    "Mom? Why isn't dad here?"
    "...we are just on a trip honey. Remember? Just the two of us. Are you hurt Mia? Mia... Mom loves you, you know? Mia... Mom..."

    She is crying again. I don't get it. I think I am a bit hurt, my chest hurts. I dunno why though. But I am okay. I am brave. Mom doesn't have to worry about me.

    I tilt my head and see a guy from the matrix with a little girl who was about my age. Her hair was long to her waist and curly. Just like mom. The girl reminded me of a doll I used to have, but dad got angry one day and threw it in the chimney and lit it on fire. I wonder if she came back to life? I think to myself as I smile and wave at her.

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  4. Adam xD everyone doesn't like the same type of story, just you wait. 
     
  5. I like the other story too
     
  6. thank you very very much! ^^
     
  7. I lerve this
     
  8. Sorry Amanda

    That was AMAZING you guys!!
     
  9. Update tomorrow I'm exhausted
     
  10. Give me a second! I'm working on it!
     
  11. Beautiful as a gem
     
  12. It should be done in 3 hours I'm busy
     
  13. Shit I forgot about this ill work on an update
     
  14. Chapter 6

    Drake's POV

    I watched Julia wave back to the little girl her cute blonde curls waving in the wind.

    I put a hand on Julia's shoulder and whisper in her ear.

    "Now Julia don't be scared, just trust me," I quietly whisper in Julia's ear.

    I take a gun from my jacket and empty it then fire a blank in the air.

    "EVERYBODY WHO WISHES TO LIVE FOLLOW ME!" I shout in a commanding voice.

    After that, I take Julia's hand and turn heel and briskly walk off.

    "Drake where are we going?" Julia asks in a confident voice.

    "I'm not sure Julia, all I know is that we are going to be safe," I respond confidentially hearing several footsteps trudge behind me.

    "Alright Drake," Julia says to me then shouts back. "Any cute girls Drake is single!" Julia screams behind us laughing.

    "Julia! Don't say that!" I saw barely holding back laughter.

    "But mommy said you needed a girlfriend!" Julia said giggling.

    "That was the last thing she said to Julia in a normal conversation," I sadly think to myself.

    "Anyway I think I see a pretty girl coming your way," Julia says giggling.

    Mysterious Person POV

    "So many people to kill, it's so, so, so...delicious," he thought licking his lips. "I better go along with this guy, he seems to be able to make people follow him…"