Someone I used to know

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by riri_, Jan 10, 2013.

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  1. Sorry everyone, I'm not posting because I half my half yearlys 

    Stupid Tests 
     
    #301 riri_, Apr 2, 2013
  2. Its okay
     
    #302 SoccerGirlC, Apr 2, 2013
  3. BUMP
     
    #303 -iEmiHaveHimTrippinForDays, Apr 2, 2013
  4. Riri,your tests are more important! :)
     
    #304 Cutie_Bunny, Apr 3, 2013
  5. AWESOME STORY
    new reader gained..wall me whn u update pls
    BUMP
     
    #305 -Saffire-xXxLovesxXx-Diablo-, Apr 3, 2013
  6. Thanks Coroline  n thanks new reader 

    Btw I got 3 more tests left yay I'll update soon after I finish them 
     
    #306 riri_, Apr 4, 2013
  7. Okay good luck
     
    #307 SoccerGirlC, Apr 4, 2013
  8. Good Luck Riri. We will be here waiting for you whenever you are free. ε: ♡
     
    #308 Fiestii, Apr 4, 2013
  9. Bumpppp
     
    #309 SoccerGirlC, Apr 8, 2013
  10. Thanks Erica 

    I have one more test left, then I'll update, I pinky promise hehehe 
     
    #310 riri_, Apr 9, 2013
  11. - Jordans Pov -

    'We are together :)'

    That's the message that appeared on my phone. A smirk ran itself onto my lips as I laid on my head onto my blue, soft pillow.

    Im proud of them. Melissa would always be the one who looked at Jackson. Stole some secret glances and felt impressed for everything he had done.

    Jackson was the person who would never realize the stare she always gave to him. Or so, thats what she always thought.

    But, Melissa was the only person who didn't realize that he was the one who really paid attention for her.

    They kept doing that for some months. Exchanging secret glance and smile though they did it unconsciously.

    Jackson would always be the person who sits across her. Watched in silent and felt amused whenever she was lost in her euphoria during her chats with me and our friends.

    I'm happy they finally realized their feelings, I thought as tears began running down my eyes. "She finally got him."






    !!!!!!!!!!!!THE END!!!!!!!!

    Sorry if you thought if it was short and dumb, but I'm really not good with writing lovey dovey long stories.

    This story is my real story about my life. I'm at the same side with Melissa. I hate waiting, to tell the truth. So bad, I can't stop waiting him to come and become my friend again, some endings are just not fairytales tho . And nowadays, I've wasted my days with crying. The memories kept playing on my mind, but I feel better after write it.

    Anyway, feel free to drop a review/comment to say if you like it or not.
     
    #311 riri_, Apr 11, 2013
  12. Awe keep ur head up and smile:) stay beautiful
     
    #312 -PA_Veronica-, Apr 11, 2013
  13. It's amazing riri sorry to hear about mysterious love.:(
     
    #313 -iJoJoAmYourNaughtyNightMare-, Apr 11, 2013
  14. Awww i like it and its cool its a real story
     
    #314 SoccerGirlC, Apr 11, 2013
  15. BUMP
     
    #315 -iEmiHaveHimTrippinForDays, Apr 11, 2013
  16. The story is great! LOVE IT but it still have room for improvement though. :)
     
    #316 Cutie_Bunny, Apr 11, 2013
  17. Riri you're a great writer and this story is amazing! And to write a story based on your own experience is awesome! :)
     
    #317 Olivia31, Apr 12, 2013
  18. still amazing. :)
     
    #318 --CastIronGremlin--, May 3, 2013
  19. I still have no idea what BUMP means(and yes, i'm practically dumb...). I pictured your story(if you don't mind) because i want to read it over and over without the use of wifi and because it was such and inspiration for me! 
    And you are one lucky girl and a great writer! 
    Damn! That story was awesome!  Would you mind if you wall me about your next story, pretty please?
    Rating: 
     
    #319 -iRoseLily_AmTheFallenLight-, May 3, 2013
  20. Sorry, I mean "this", "This story is awesome!" 
     
    #320 -iRoseLily_AmTheFallenLight-, May 3, 2013
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