Spiked Tears: Preview (Draft 1)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoneDeleted, May 17, 2012.

  1. I tried to escape, but she just forced more motion to my gut, piercing slowly.
    I didn't want to scream, but I hesitated that spoke, so low I never thought,"Fine, let me go, I'll tel you."
     
  2. Her lip, caused a great relief to her, she let me go, causing my motioned body to fall, face first. My head ached, speed to the spot.

    She sharpened her dagger, taking it out," You don't know me do you?"

    I laughed, suprised at my own voice, " At this point, no."
     
  3. She calmed, checked around the place for any witnesses, then she came, crouched down,"Tears and humans are not alone."

    My heart stopped, pleased and so gleamed. We had other kind?
    I couldn't even feel my face after what she said.
    But I stopped, frowning,"How do you know this?"

    She smile, so gently, turned madly exotic,"My sister, wasn't human or tear."
     
  4. I beamed," what was she?"

    She shrugged,"Idk, she wouldn't tell me."
     
  5. --|--|--| Announcement |--|--|--|
    I wanted to show pics of what everyone looked like, give me a minute and I'll give you the order.(as of now, if you want an extra char in, apply your form)
    1. Sacoto
    2.Bryn
    3.Whit
    4.Calla
    5.Raven
    6.Azura
    (the tiger is a Tiger)
    (the sister is off now)
     
  6. Sigh, sry, it's hard to find everyone! Lol
     
  7. 1. Sacoto
    Mind the picture that Sacoto has one eye blue and other eye green
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  8. 2. Bryn
    Shes a schoolteacher now, but she's a strong
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  9. 4.Calla
    She is shy, but deadly.
    She is usually pale, but outside the walls, her skin is like the picture.
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  10. 5. Raven is already presented, in the beg.
     
  11. I groaned at the response, eager to learn more,"Why wouldn't she tell you?"
     
  12. She shrugged, completely uninterested,"No clue. But I believe her, she was mainly my role model. Brave, in toughest matters."

    I sighed,"Well, do you want to find out?"

    She rolled her eyes,"I didn't come here to find what my sister is, I came to finish my studies, then do that."

    I snorted, knowing that this girl was head to toe material for silence,"Well, I did nothing, but come hang out with us."

    She sighed, careless,"Whatever, well shouldn't you be out of my sight?"

    I cringed. This girl is never pleased, I swear.
    "Bye, your really different, beautiful."

    Her eyes, widened and popped, like she overheard the war,"What did you say?"

    I smiled, heading out through the archway,"Beautiful, simply beautiful."
     
  13. Her mouth, gaped in judgment, seized, but she just got back to her studies, but eyeing her pendent necklace, as a treasure.

    As I raced out of that section, I spotted Whit, and Bryn heading out of the Sacritum. As I ram desperately to catch them, Bryn voice echoed through my mind,"Things are never the same."

    My mind paced but after that dream, I bumped into Bryn, causing her books and bag to knock down.

    As she mumbled and sweated, she caught my eye and smirked, trying to get up,"Ah, S, clumsy today?

    I blushed, so rare I tried to hard to hide it,"N-no. Just wondering of this amazing place."

    Whit laughs completely, trying to hold in, but doesn't seem to have the determination to.
    "My my my, Sacoto, the clumsy one now!"

    I punched his gut, causing him to flinch to get ground,"Maybe even forceful."

    As Whit suffers from my blow, Bryn snickers.
     
  14. Yep, I'm grateful.
     
  15. Announcement
    As to bad situations, I must resign and leave pimd, forever. I humbly am grateful for all my friends who always were a part of my .
    I would like to thank the following:
     
  16. Plans were set so I'm staying! Keep reading and I have Collaborations so keep in touch!
     
  17. I sighed,"You cannot believe what I have in store."

    Whit grunted, then snapped his fingers,"You have a new pig in your den!"

    I growled, giving him the See-if-you-keep-doing-that-you'll-be-dead- look.

    Bryn just kept snickering then commented,"Unlikely, yes?"
     
  18. Please share your thoughts. Want to make sure this isnt a complete waste or it is one 