Spiked Tears: Preview (Draft 1)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoneDeleted, May 17, 2012.

  1. Why thank you  it's been a while 
     
  2. Hey guys, I'll be doing another update if I have 5 bumps!
    Thanks!
    -sky the author
     
  3.  aww thanks Jodie, I love your story, so keep doing it, your an amazing author!
     
  4.  mine is ok, nothing extraordinary
     
  5. Thanks sky I love yours 
     
  6.  haha thank you.
     
  7. Really? That's good to hear 
     
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  9. -astounded- and 5 bumps.. Ok I will continue! Lol Ty Jodie, your awesome 
     
  10. My feet rose, my smile growing wider,"Well little girl, what is your name?

    She stared at me, confused.
    "My names Azura......and you must be Sacoto.

    My hands fly in the air.
    "Does everyone know about me?"

    She nods," Sadly, yes. With the trouble you make....who doesn't."she snickers.
    I felt offended, yet, pleased. Sadly, she says? Well, at least I hope I'm not considered a bad person.
    I smiled, eager," Would you like me to help you with your studies?"

    Her eyes widened, cautious," Are you kidding me?"

    I raises an eyebrow,"erm, yes, I am
    Not kidding you. Is this what you say to people these days?"

    She shrugs, knowingly," I don't care, I'm an outcast."

    Then it hit me.
     
  11. My life was endless loneliness, wrapping me in its hallow encasing of forever holding. I felt her pain, dragging every moment to search for some approvable without harming her intervention.

    I smiled, causing her to scrounge," Same here. I'm actually lucky to be seeing here with people, actually talking to you."

    She signed,"Whatever. Are you gonna help with me or not? I don't have all day."
     
  12. Whit called out," For my sake, S, you really have to stop to places and leave us, searching for you, now come along ok?"He smiled, nicely, hopefully trying to convince me.

    No luck.
     
  13. I breathed," Whit, I'm here ok?"

    Whits voice escaped,"Suite yourself, alpha."

    I growled at his response, but I genuinely passed it away, knowing revenge is always after.

    Azura rolled her eyes, "What I need help, is remembering how the unknown tiger legend is abruptly being seen often, in my book."

    I sat down at her pace, trying to make it as simple as possible," Do you believe in this tiger?"

    She scoffed annoyed,"Of course, this tiger is the reason we have a reason of living, of searching beyond our rises and expectations."

    I notices on her neck, I glimmering golden pendent of the white tiger, through mist, rising out of the shadows, with a pure light, probably showing luck and future.

    The girl cleared her throat, annoyed," Thanks for looking at my neck, care to be a vampire and suck it?"

    I frowned, unexplained, I studied her face so hard. What was wrong with this girl, had I don't something wrong to her that made her be this way?

    She interrupted,"This necklace shows luck ok? Big whoop, my sister have it to me."

    I observed her face, bony and unhappy.
    "What caused your sister to give it to you?"
     
  14. She sneered, her face red, looking as if she was about to explode, but she calmed,"My sister went to search for the tiger, outside our domain. She told me she was not coming back soon."

    My brows narrowed,"And what happened to her?"

    She turned to face me, her face full of regret,"No one knows, she hasn't come back yet, it's been 3 years.
    They confirmed her dead my the tears."She spat the word tears like it was a demons purpose.
     
  15. I felt bad, but supposingly, happy the girl had a taste of defeat.

    She muttered the words," But I know she's alive, I feel her."

    My voice was left out, when I hadn't wanted to,"I think so to."
    I covered my mouth with my hands.
    Why did I say that? Damn myself.
     
  16. She looked, shocked, afraid of me, still observing me, with no sudden movement,"How so? You go outside the domain?"

    I shivered, my throat burning, smoke rising in my stomach, " Why should I tell you?"

    She then grabbed me by my wrists and dashed me to the wall, forcing my lungs to enravel pain in every level. This girl must get what she wants.

    She pressed on my writs tighter,"If you don't, I'll kill you right on this spot."
    So a girl this age can do this? My place does well.